Question

【题目】书面表达。

中澳友好协会准备就“A Gift from the Heart”为题举办征文比赛，要求参赛者分享在一些特别的日子(生日、节日....)用心准备的礼物。

写作要求:

1.词数：80—120词；

2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

参考要点：

1.介绍特别的日子；

2.分享赠送的礼物；

3.表述礼物的意义。

A Gift from the Heart

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Answer 1

【答案】A Gift from the Heart

It was the last day of that term. My classmates were very excited at the coming holiday. But my friend, Mike, looked unhappy because he failed the English test.

While thinking about how to cheer him up, I saw my English notebook. Although it was very important for me. I decided to give it to him. He looked at me in surprise. He knew how carefully I took the notes. I told him that I could also help him learn English.

Mike has made progress with the help of my gift, the notebook. It’s not expensive but it’s from my heart.

【解析】这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你在一些特别的日子(生日、节日....)用心准备的礼物。所提供的材料中列举了书写的要点：1) 介绍特别的日子；2) 分享赠送的礼物；3) 表述礼物的意义。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意征文中必须包含材料中的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，根据题干要求，可分为三段：1. 特别的日子及得到的礼物；2. 介绍礼物的原因；3. 表达礼物的作用或意义。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

But my friend, Mike, looked unhappy because he failed the English test. 但是我的朋友迈克看起来很不高兴，因为他英语考试不及格。这句话用了because引导的句子。

【高分句型二】

While thinking about how to cheer him up, I saw my English notebook. 在想着如何让他高兴的时候，我看到了我的英语笔记本。how to cheer him up是动词不定式短语。

【高分句型三】

Mike has made progress with the help of my gift, the notebook. 迈克在我的礼物、笔记本的帮助下取得了进步。with the help of在……的帮助下。