Question

【题目】书面表达

2017年济南市入选全国文明城市。为巩固文明城市创建成果，共建美好济南，济南市团委正在开展“学雷锋、讲文明、树新风”的活动，作为一名中学生，我们平时应该从以下几个方面来规范自己的言行举止。请根据下列提示，写一篇短文。

倡导低碳	骑自行车或步行上学，注意节约……
保护环境	爱护花草，不乱扔垃圾……
礼貌待人	常说“谢谢”、“ 对不起”、“ 请”等礼貌语言……
帮助他人	助人为乐，积极参加志愿者活动……

要求： 1.词数100个左右。

2.所写短文必须包括以上内容，自由发挥的内容必须围绕主题。

3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.

Answer 1

【答案】In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.

First.we should choose to live a low-carbon life. We’d better go to school by bike or on foot. When we are shopping. we can use baskets or cloth bags instead of plastic bags. We should also pay attention to saving. We must say NO to waste. We shouldn’t buy anything we don’t need.

Second，it’s our duty to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw litter or rubbish about and we should take care of trees and flowers.

Third，it’s necessary for us to show good manners to others/ be polite to others. We need to say polite words such as“Thank You. I’m sorry and Please” as often as possible.

Finally, we should devote ourselves to helping others. We should learn from Lei Feng and be willing to help others. It’s important for us to take part in voluntary work.

We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!

【解析】

本文是一篇给材料作文。为使济南市入选全国文明城市，巩固文明城市创建成果，共建美好济南，济南市团委开展“学雷锋、讲文明、树新风”的活动，作为一名中学生，我们平时应该规范自己的言行举止。要求根据所给出的提示，写一篇短文。根据所给材料可知时态用一般现在时，人称用第一人称。本文给出的材料比较具体全面，考生需要用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，并可进行适当想象发挥。写作中注意理顺要点，防止漏写，注意表达的条理性、连贯性；注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误；要使用自己有把握的句式、单词，词汇、句式要丰富多样，避免句式单一。最后检查所用时态、人称是否符合要求；检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确，语法、拼写、标点、移行、大小写等方面是否有误等。