Question

12．目前，环保已经成为社会关注的热点．请结合生活实际，号召人们行动起来，为环保做贡献．请就此为校英语报刊写一篇稿子．

What we should do in our daily life	◇travel in a green way
	◇turn off the electric products
	◇…
What the government should do	◇find out new ways to make energy
	◇…

注意：（1）内容必须包括表格所给的信息，并提出至少2条建议，并说明理由；
（2）词数：70左右；
（3）短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Now we are faced with serious problems．Therefore，something must be done to help the world．We can travel in a green way，such as going to school or work by bus or by bike．Also we can have the habit of turning off the electric products when we no longer use them．It's also necessary for governments to find out new ways to make energy instead of the old ones that bring pollution to the environment．I think they should stop factories from pouring dirty water into the rivers because clean water is really important to people's health．
As a member of the world，everyone should do something for the earch．
Protect the environment，start now!

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是号召人们行动起来，为环保做贡献．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．我们该做什么：绿色出行，不用的时候关掉电器；
2．政府：创造新的能源；
常用到的重点短语：
no longer 不再
find out 找到
instead of 代替，而不是
stop sb from doing sth 阻止某人做某事

【高分句型】
1，Also we can have the habit of ①turning off the electric products②when we no longer use them．
①turn off 关掉
②when引导的时间状语从句．
2．①It's also necessary for governments to ②find out new ways to make energy③instead of the old ones④that bring pollution to the environment．
①it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
②find out 找到
③instead of 代替，而不是
④that作为关系词的定语从句，that作为从句的主语，修饰前面的the old ones．
3．I think①they should ②stop factories from pouring dirty water into the rivers③because clean water is really important to people's health．
①think后接的是省略了that的宾语从句
②stop sb from doing sth 阻止某人做某事
③because引导的原因状语从句．

解答 Now we are faced with serious problems．Therefore，something must be done to help the world
     We can travel in a green way，such as going to school or work by bus or by bike．（绿色出行）Also we can have the habit of turning off the electric products when we no longer use them．【高分句型】（不用的时候关掉电器）It's also necessary for governments to find out new ways to make energy instead of the old ones that bring pollution to the environment．【高分句型】（找到新能源）I think they should stop factories from pouring dirty water into the rivers because clean water is really important to people's health．【高分句型】（阻止工厂的污染环境的行为）
     As a member of the world，everyone should do something for the earch．（号召）
     Protect the environment，start now!

点评 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性．完成提示词时也要符合事实．温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少．学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理．