题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,最近你和同学们经常谈论最敬佩的人。某英文网站正在举行“A Person I Admire”的征文活动,请你写一篇短文参加此次活动。谈谈你最敬佩的人是谁,他/她是什么样的人,以及你敬佩他/她的原因。
提示词语:kind, helpful, have some difficulties, encourage, solve the problems
提示问题: Who is the person that you admire?
What is he/she like?
Why do you admire him/her?
【答案】The person I admire is my English teacher, Ms Liu. She is kind and helpful. She is very popular among us because she spends lots of time on lessons and has a good sense of humor. When we have some difficulties in our studies, she encourages us to work on and tells us how to solve the problems. She is common, but I admire and love her.
【解析】这是一篇命题作文,属于应用文写作。本文已经给出了主要写作要点,动笔前要先认真阅读要点,尽量将提示的内容利用上;提示的问题就是写作的基本方向,然后围绕要点适当发挥。结合材料内容,可知人称为第三人称,时态以一般现在时态为主。注意主谓一致。适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。