Question

【题目】书面表达

91. 假定你是李华，收到英国笔友 Harry 的邮件，获悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他回复。词数 80 左右。

Dear Li Hua,

I’m glad to tell you that I’ve just won the the first place in a robot- making competition. I love robots! They bring me great fun.

What do yo think of robots? Do you want to have your own robot? Why? Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

参考词汇：congratulation 祝贺

注意事项：

1. 回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。

Dear Harry,

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Yours, Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear harry

Congratulations! How glad I am to share your good news!

I think robots are helpful in many ways. And in the future they’ll play more important roles in our daily life. Plus, I’m dying to have a robot of my own. I can have it take care of my grandparents when we are not at home. You see, my grandparents are old and cannot move easily. It can help them do some housework such as cooking, cleaning the house and so on.

【解析】

本文属于应用文体，就英国笔友哈利在机器人制作比赛中获奖写一封回信。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如play roles in, daily life, be dying to, take care of, help sb do, such as, and so on以及how glad I am中how引导的感叹句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。