Question

【题目】书面表达。

请根据下列表格的提示, 写一篇题为Changes in My Hometown的短文。（80词左右）

内容要点:

过去	现在
1.旧房	1.高楼
2.河水肮脏	2.河水清澈
3.步行、骑自行车上班	3.乘公交车、小汽车上班
4.道路狭窄	4.环形路宽阔
5.居住条件差	5.居住环境舒适

Changes in My Hometown

Answer 1

【答案】Changes in My Hometown

In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in my hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were hard. People went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in my hometown. The river is clean and the water is clear. There are many ring roads and the living conditions are comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.

I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. I think my hometown will be much more beautiful in the future.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。