Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求间桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误。每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号^，并在其下面写出该增加的词。删除：把多余的词用(/)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1） 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词,
2）在答题卡的第六节的题上答题.
3）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分.
There lived a unhappy king a long time ago. He slept badly. His face was always pale. He often cries for no reason. This made the queen worrying. One day, a doctor was called to examine the king. He said to the queen. “Something is wrong in your mind. He needs to wear the shirt of a happy person to make himself happy.” Then, the palace singers came to the palace and said. “It's the true that I'm famous. And I'm not happy because I'm always worried about being followed by the others.” Finally, a poor man came to the king room. This was what he said “Even I am neither an officer nor a famous person, I'm happy, because I have everything I want, I don't want what I can't have.”

Answer 1

【答案】a → an；cries → cried；worrying → worried；called → called in；your → his；singers → singer；And → But；the others → others；king → king's；Even → Even though
【解析】短文大意：很久以前有一个不快乐的国王。他睡得很厉害。他的脸总是苍白的。他经常无缘无故地哭。这让女王担心。所以有一天召来一个医生给国王做检查。
（1）unhappy是一个以元音音素开头的单词，所以在它前面的不定冠词要用an。
（2）联系上句His face was always pale 以及下文可知该用一般过去时，所以应将cries 改为动词过去式 cried。
（3）make sb + 形容词，表示使某人处于某种状态，而worrying的意思是令人担忧的，所以应该为 worried，感到担忧的。
（4）a doctor was called to examine the king 的意思应该是一个医生被召来给国王做检查。所以应将called 改为短语called in。
（5）根据后一句He needs to wear the shirt of a happy person to make himself happy.可推知应将your改为his。
（6）根据后文中It's the true that I'm famous. 可推知是一个歌手，所以应将singers改为单数singer。
（7）It's the true that I'm famous. 和I'm not happy 之间是转折关系，不是顺承关系，所以应将And改为But。
（8）被别人跟着，这里表示泛指，所以应将the others前面的定冠词去掉。
（9）the king room在句中表示国王的房间，所以应将名词king改为所有格形式king’s。
（10）Even只能修饰形容词或副词，不能修饰整个句子，所以应该为Even though引导从句。