Question

【题目】书面表达

世界在发展,生活在变化,杜会的进步让我们的生活越来越好,请通过以下四组图片,从信息来源、购物方式、居住环境、联系方式等方面,以“ How Life Changes”为题写一篇短文。

要求：1.词数80-100；

2.请先简要介绍表格中的4组图片,再根据生活实际列举1-2个方面,做适当发挥；

3.字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确,逻辑清晰。

4.提示词： get news and information； keep in touch with； talk with； communicate with； send and receive messages； used to do....

How life changes

Great changes have taken place in our life for years,

Answer 1

【答案】How Life Changes

Great changes have taken place in our life for years. In the past, people read newspapers, listened to the radio and watched TV for news and other information. People kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or sending postcards. They would buy everything in the shop or market. Big families had to share small houses which were old and dirty. Child used to go to school by bicycle.

But now people can get information on the mobile phones or computers almost at any place and at any time. They can buy things online at home. What’s more, people can talk to others by email, We Chat or QQ, with which they can send and receive messages whenever they like. More and more people live in big and bright apartments with several rooms. Some families are rich enough to send their children to school in their own cars. In a word, people live better than before.

【解析】试题分析：本文是话题作文，题目是How Life Changes，也是图表作文。考生首先要认真阅读下面四组图，认真领会图表信息，从信息来源、购物方式、居住环境、联系方式等方面叙述生活在变化,杜会的进步让我们的生活越来越好。认真审题，把提示内容要点写清，可适当发挥，文中内容要连贯。先列好提纲，然后在写，要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，注意使用提示词，最好使用我们熟悉和背过的句型，尽量不要使用复杂的从句，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误，字数不要写的太少，80词以上。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的作文。内容要点完整、应用词汇灵活准确，句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，上下文连贯。内容覆盖所有要点；应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇，注意了连词和时态的使用，没有语言错误。