Question

【题目】上周五，你们的学校为无家可归的儿童举行了一场慈善义卖活动。你的老师请你为大家写一份英语的演讲稿作 总结并表达你自己的看法，内容包括以下要点。

注意：

1、参考词汇：慈善义卖( Charity fair)，无家可归的( homeless)；

2、字数 80 词左右,开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数;

3、不得在文中透露自己的真实姓名和学校名称，否则不予评分。

Dear teachers and classmates，

It's my honor to be here to share my thoughts with you today.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all! Thank you for your attention!

Answer 1

【答案】Dear teachers and classmates,

It's my honor to be here to share my thoughts with you today. Last Friday, we held a Charity Fair on the school playground to collect money for the homeless children.

All the teachers and students took part in the fair because we really would like to help the children in need. During the Charity Fair, we sold a lot of different things. Some of us sold lots of food and drinks. Some sold their old books, such as storybooks, magazines and so on. Some even sold their favourite toys. We were so excited that we totally collected about 3000 yuan in the end.

All of us enjoyed ourselves very much. It was such a wonderful day I would never forget! That's all! Thank you for your attention！

【解析】

这篇作文要求我们对学校为无家可归的儿童举行的义卖活动写一篇英语的演讲稿，总结这次活动并发表自己的看法。题目中利用图表的形式，展示了这次活动的相关信息，这也是写作的一个提纲，我们应根据这里的内容，组织语言，充实细节，串联成完整的短文。写作前应仔细观察这一图表，弄清楚里面的内容，确定文章的要点和主体以及短文中应使用的时态、人称等。通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般过去时态，注意谓语动词形式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式形式。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译汉语，而应从句子的整体结构出发，选择恰当的句型和词汇表达。可以使用较容易掌握的简单句结构，如主谓宾或主系表结构。穿插使用较长的句式，如并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式，提升文章档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章意思连贯。