Question

【题目】在你的生活或学习中，你认为快乐是什么？也许是拥有一位慈母、一位良师、

一位挚友、一本好书、一只宠物、一个梦想……珍惜眼前的快乐，快乐就在身边。请以“Happiness Around Me”为题，选取一个角度，用英语写一篇短文，以表达你的真情实感。

内容包括：1. What is happiness in your opinion ?

2. As a student, how can you get happiness? Give an example or tell a story.

写作要求：1. 词数100词左右。

2. 文中不得出现真实的学校名称和姓名。

3. 语言力求准确，书写美观，卷面整洁。

“Happiness Around Me”

Answer 1

【答案】If we ask people what is happiness, they will give us the answer like a lot of money because we fight all our lives to make money. The pursuit of fortune and fame bring people the great sense of satisfaction, while the true happiness is ignored by most people. No matter how much money we make, it can’t make up the time for having dinner with our parents. In China, there is the saying that it is too late to raise parents when the children have made enough money. Money can’t buy everything, but we can cherish every moment with our relatives, which worths all. Don’t do it until it is too late.

【解析】这是一篇提纲作文，写作中注意将所提示的内容情况要介绍清楚。动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要为一般现在时，人称主要是第一人称和第三人称，注意主谓一致问题。写作中注意语义通顺，不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。