Question

【题目】 Writing（作文）

You are graduating from middle school soon. Your parents will give you a gift to celebrate the important time. Write a letter with at least 60 words to your mum and dad. Tell what you want and how useful and important it is to you. The beginning part of the letter is given.

你即将初中刚毕业，父母准备一份礼物给你庆祝这一重要时刻。写一篇至少60词的信给你的父母。告诉他们你想要什么礼物，它对你的重要性及用处。信的开头已给。

（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号不占格）

Answer 1

【答案】Dear parents,

I am graduating from middle school soon.You want to give me a gift to celebrate the important time.I hope that you will give me a computer as a gift.If I get it,my daily life will really change.For one thing,I can use the learning software to study.It will help me improve my grades.For another thing,I will send emails to my friends.So it is easy for me to communicate with my friends.Besides,I will collect things about learning and search for information on the computer.It will help me to gain knowledge.What is more,I can play computer games and chat with e-pals in my spare time. How interesting it is!

Yours,

xxx

【解析】本文是一篇给材料作文。在初中即将毕业之际，父母准备送一份礼物给你庆祝这一重要时刻。要求写一封信告诉父母你想要什么礼物，它对你的重要性及用处。根据所给的材料内容可知该文时态主要以一般将来时和一般现在时为主，人称主要用第一人称书写。在写作的时候，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性；同时要注意准确运用时态，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。为了使文章更通顺完整，需要用上适当的连接词；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，确保正确率；另外，可以用上一些句型、短语，较高级的语言，这样会使文章更出色。