Question

【题目】 短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加或一个单词的删除，其他错误为单词的修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出增加的词。删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Jim,

I am glad tell you something about the traditional art in my hometown.

My hometown is Weifang. It lie in Shandong Province. It is know for kites making. In my hometown, the history of making kites can go back to over 2，000 year ago. Kites are main made of bamboo, strings and papers. Kites can be made into different the in sizes, shapes and colors. We all like flying kites in the sky at spring. Flying kites is interested. I hope you can come to my hometown one day and fly kites with mine.

Yours，

Wang Dong

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I am glad ∧to tell you something about the traditional art in my hometown.

My hometown is Weifang. It lie,lies in Shandong Province. It is know, known for kites making. In my hometown, the history of making kites can go back to over 2，000 year,years ago. Kites are main,mainly made of bamboo, strings and papers,paper. Kites can be made into different the in sizes, shapes and colors. We all like flying kites in the sky at,in spring. Flying kites is interested,interesting. I hope you can come to my hometown one day and fly kites with mine,me.

Yours，

Wang Dong

【解析】

这篇短文主要是讲述了作者对他家乡的介绍。

be glad to do sth.表示乐于做某事，添加to

这里是一般现在时态，主要是it是单数，谓语动词lie变第三人称单数lies.

短语be known for…表示因……而闻名，这里把know变成known.。

over 2，000 years ago表示两千年之前；这里year用复数years.

这里是副词修饰动词，把main变成mianly.

Paper是不可数名词，这里不能变复数。

can be made into different in sizes, shapes and colors.表示能被制成不同种类的型号，形状和颜色。这里把the去掉。

在春天用介词in, in spring表示在春天。

Flying kites是物作主语，表示有趣的用interseting。Interested是人做主语。

fly kites with sb.表示同某人放风筝，代词用宾格，这里用I的宾格me。