Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你叫李华，是九年级的一名学生，自从上个月你们学校为迎接义务教育均衡发展督导团的检查，你们学校发生了很大的变化，现在请就你的所见所闻及感受写一篇100字的文章。

要求：包含以下要点，语句连贯、通顺。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

1.所有的老师热爱他们的工作，对学生严格要求，彼此密切合作，以便使得课堂生动有趣。

2.学生也非常尊重（respect）他们的老师，上课……(自由发挥1-2点)，课后按时完成并上交作业，遇有困难向老师求助。

3.学生爱好广泛，积极参加各种课外活动。许多九年级的学生参加……,因为……。学生之间更友好，时刻准备着互相帮助。

4.学生尽力保持校园的干净美丽，（举1-2例）。

5.感受……（1-2点）

Since our school got ready to meet the check of the balanced development of compulsory education last month, great changes have taken place in our school. Now our school is more harmonious(和谐的) and beautiful.

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Answer 1

【答案】Since our school got ready to meet the check of the balanced development of compulsory education last month, great changes have taken place in our school. Now our school is more harmonious(和谐的) and beautiful.

All teachers love their work and they are strict with students .Also they work closely with each other to make the class lively and interesting.

We students also have great respect for their teachers.We can finish our homework on time after class and hand it in. If we have any difficulty, we can ask the teacher for help. Students have a wide range of hobbies and actively participate in various after-class activities. Even many ninth-grade students take part in them because they think they are good for their study . The students are more friendly and ready to help each other. Students try their best to keep the campus clean and beautiful.They mustn’t throw rubbish everywhere.

In my opinion, students try their best to make their own campus more beautiful. I am glad to see the changes.

【解析】

本文属于材料作文，讲述学校发生的变化。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如be strict with, each other, hand in, ask sb for help, participate in, take part in, be good for, be ready to, try one’s best to, in my opinion等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。