Question

【题目】短文改错

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意：1. 每句不超过两处错误；

2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

3. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Students these days really have lots of worries. Some has problems with their schoolwork. Other have any problems with their friends or parents. I think problems and worries are normal for life, but we should try solve them. The best thing is to do nothing. Last year a teacher give some advices to us, Now I know it is best not to run away from our problems. Talking to someone helps a lot of. You will be halfway to solve a problem if you talk to someone about it.

Answer 1

【答案】Students these days really have lots of worries. Some has problems with their schoolwork.

have

Other have any problems with their friends or parents. I think problems and worries are normal

Others some

for life, but we should try∧solve them. The best thing is to do nothing. Last year our teacher

in to worst

give some advices to us. Now I know she thinks it is best not to run away from our problems. Talking

gave advice

to someone helps a lot of . You will be halfway to solve a problem if you talk to someone about it.

solving

【解析】

短文大意：本文作者就当前学生中间存在的烦恼陈述了自己的看法，并就如何解决这些烦恼给出了合理的建议。

第1行第2句主语“some”意思是“一些学生”，复数意义，动词需用原形，可知has错误，需改为have。

第2行第1句主语“Other”意思是“其他学生”，复数意义，需用others代指，可知Other错误，需改为Others。

第2行第1句中“any”应该用于否定句和疑问句，本句是肯定句，可知any错误，需改为some。

第3行第1句中“in life在生活中”是固定短语，可知for错误，需改为in。

第3行第1句后面的分句“try to do努力做某事”是固定结构，可知try solve结构错误，需在中间加不定式符号to。

第3行第2句“The best thing is to do nothing最好什么也不做”，这和前句“but we should try to solve them但我们应该努力解决它们”相矛盾，可知best错误，需改为worst。

第3行第3句，根据时间“Last year去年”可知动词需用过去式，所以give错误，需改为gave。

第4行第1句中“some”后面应接复数名词或不可数名词；“advice建议”是不可数名词，可知advices错误，需改为advice。

第5行第1句末“a lot of许多的”需接名词，help（帮助）是动词，需用副词短语a lot（很多）修饰，可知a lot of错误，需划掉of。

第5行第2句中“solve解决”前面的to是介词，动词需用动名词形式，可知solve错误，需改为solving。