Question

【题目】假设你是Andy, 你打算在寒假期间去某个城市旅行，现在你正写一封电子邮件给你的笔友Bob讲述你的旅行计划。

首先把空格1补充完整，正文不少于50个词，标点符号不占格。

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Bob,

Thank you for your last letter. I am writing to tell you about hometown.I have known you want to come to china to enjoy your winter vacation and travel to Shanxi province from your letter.I'm honored you can come to my hometown.If you come here,I'll take you to many beautiful and wonderful places,such as The Ancient City of Ping Yao ,Qiao's Grand Courtyard ,Mount Wutai and so on.I'm sure you'll like them.There are also have some delicious local food in my place.The most famous food in our place is noodle.For instance,shaved noodles of Datong,dumplings of Yongji.They are really delicious.

I really expect you can come to my hometown soon.I'll be here waiting for you.

【解析】试题分析：本篇习作成功地完成了写作任务，表达顺畅，结构连贯，字数符合要求。准确运用时态，要点全面，语法正确，上下文意思连贯，适当发挥了想象。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动，例如Thank you for，such as，and so on，For instance等。而多种句式的运用则是本文的亮点，例如，I am writing to tell you about hometown.，I have known you want to come to china to enjoy your winter vacation and travel to Shanxi province from your letter.，If you come to here,I'll take you to many beautiful and wonderful places,，There are also have some delicious local food in my place.。总之，这是一篇非常优秀的习作。