Question

【题目】写作。

写一篇你所喜爱的宠物短文。写出它的外貌、个性及如何照顾它。不少于60字。

Answer 1

【答案】I have a lovely dog. Its name is YoYo. I like it very much. It has two big ears, two big and bright eyes. Its hair is brown. It has come to my home for a year. It has become a part of my family. It has its own house, but it likes to sleep under my bed. I feed it after school.I often play with it and we have a good time together.

【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如very much，come to my home，for a year，a part of my family，like to do，under my bed，after school，play with，have a good time等。而I have a lovely dog. / It has two big ears, two big and bright eyes. / It has become a part of my family.等多种时态句式的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。