题目内容
4.一首"Where is the time?"又一次引发了人们对时间的感慨,作为即将参加中考的你,将怎样充分利用时间,为初中三年画上一个圆满的句号.请从以下几个方面,以"Treasure every minute"为题,写一篇不少于80词的短文.(文章里不能出现真实校名和人名)(1)时间的重要性 (2)你身边浪费时间的现象
(3)你的时间去哪儿了 (4)你将怎样充分利用余下的时间?
Treasure every minute
People often say,"Time is money,"But in fact time is more valuable than money.If money is spent,we can earn it back.However,if time is lost,it will never return.This is the reason why we must value time.The time we have is limited.But there are a lot of people who do not know the importance of time.They spend their time chatting,smoking or drinking.They do not realize that wasting time is simply wasting their valuable life.As for me,I spend most of my time doing homework.In a word,every minute is precious,we should make full use of our time.Do not leave what can be done today to tomorrow.
分析 【高分句型一】
But there are a lot of people who do not know the importance of time但是有些人不知道时间的重要性.
who是关系词的定语从句,修饰people.
【高分句型二】
They do not realize that wasting time is simply wasting their valuable life他们没有意识到浪费时间就是浪费他们的宝贵的生命.
that引导的宾语从句,作为realize的宾语.
解答 People often say,"Time is money,"But in fact time is more valuable than money.If money is spent,we can earn it back.However,if time is lost,it will never return.This is the reason why we must value time.The time we have is limited.(时间的重要性 )But there are a lot of people who do not know the importance of time【高分句型一】.They spend their time chatting,smoking or drinking.They do not realize that wasting time is simply wasting their valuable life.【高分句型二】(身边浪费时间的现象)As for me,I spend most of my time doing homework(你的时间去哪儿了).In a word,every minute is precious,we should make full use of our time.Do not leave what can be done today to tomorrow.(你将怎样充分利用余下的时间)
点评 以提纲提供情景的作文.要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性,就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题,但要注意,文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点.行文间要注意简化描述,用简短的语句代替冗长的语句.在作文完成的时候,应该检查、修改,以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节.
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