Question

18．端午节是中国的传统节日．吃粽子是中国的一种传统习俗．每年农历五月初，中国百姓家家户户要浸糯米、洗粽叶、包粽子．请根据以下提示，描写制作粽子的过程．
要求：1、制作过程必须包括以下的五个环节；
2、词数80词左右（开头的首句已给出，不计算在总词数内）．
蒸粽子steam…

How shall we make Zongzi？
To make this special food，we need to haveone kilo of glutinous rice，half a kilo of beef，some red dates，two spoons of salt，some reed leaves and some strings．
How to make Zongzi？First，put the glutinous rice into the clean water and keep it for two hours．At the same time，wash some reed leaves and cut the beef into pieces．Next，shape the reed leaves by hand．Then，fill them with the glutinous rice and beef pieces．Add some red dates if you like．And then，tie Zongziwith strings．Finally，steam them．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是描写制作粽子的过程．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第二人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1材料：糯米，粽叶，牛肉，红枣，盐，线
2步骤：浸糯米，切牛肉，拢粽叶，填充馅料，扎粽子，蒸粽子
常用到的重点短语：
put …into…把…放进…里面
at the same time 同时
cut…into pieces 切碎
by hand 手工的
【高分句型】
1．①At the same time，wash some reed leaves and②cut the beef into pieces．
①at the same time 同时
②cut…into pieces 切碎

2．Next，shape the reed leaves by hand．
by hand 手工的，作方式状语

3．Add some red dates if you like．
if引导的条件状语从句，主句是祈使句，从句用一般现在时．

解答 How shall we make Zongzi？
   To make this special food，we need to have one kilo of glutinous rice，half a kilo of beef，some red dates，two spoons of salt，some reed leaves and some strings．（材料）
   How to make Zongzi？First，put the glutinous rice into the clean water and keep it for two hours．At the same time，wash some reed leaves and cut the beef into pieces．（浸糯米，切牛肉）【高分句型】Next，shape the reed leaves by hand．（拢粽叶）【高分句型】Then，fill them with the glutinous rice and beef pieces．Add some red dates if you like．（填充馅料【高分句型】And then，tie Zongzi with strings．（扎粽子Finally，steam them．（蒸粽子）

点评 这里是一篇图表作文，需要表达如何制作粽子，此类作文注意用一些表顺序的词来让步骤流畅，句型主要是祈使句．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并需有适当发挥．要注意句式的多样性．