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3．为了践行社会主义核心价值观，你校学生会决定举办以"文明礼仪伴我行"为主题的英语征文比赛，请你根据以下的要点提示及要求，写一篇英语短文参赛．
要点提示：1．尊敬（respect）父母，帮助他们做家务；
2．对人有礼貌，诚实友好，帮助他人；
3．不在公共场所大声讲话，不乱扔垃圾；
4．节约粮食，节约用水；
要求：1．短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息（不要逐字翻译），并在此基础上适当发挥；
2.80词左右（短文开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3．文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名．
As a middle school student，we should have good manners．．First，we should respect our parents and help them do some housework．Second，we should be polite and honest．Also，it's always good to be kind and friendly．We should try our best to help the people in need．Third，we'd better not talk loudly in public．Don't throw rubbish everywhere．It's our duty to keep our city clean and beautiful．Fourth，we are supposed to save food and water．Lastly，it's important and necessary for us to help protect the environment．
In a word，good manners can make a difference and lead to a better future．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是写一篇文章参加"文明礼仪伴我行"的正文比赛．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一，三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．尊敬父母，帮助他们做家务；
2．对人有礼貌，诚实友好，帮助他人；
3．不在公共场所大声讲话，不乱扔垃圾；
4．节约粮食，节约用水；
常用到的重点短语：
help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
try one's best t do sth． 尽力做某事
had better do sth 最好做某事
be supposed to do sth 应该做某事
【高分句型】
1．We should①try our best to help the people ②in need．
①try one's best t do sth． 尽力做某事
②in need 在危急中
2．①It's our duty to ②keep our city clean and beautiful．
①it是形式主语，动词不定式是真正主语．
②keep…adj保持…怎么样的
3．Lastly，it's important and necessary for us to help protect the environment．
It's+adj+for sb to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式是真正主语．

解答 As a middle school student，we should have good manners．First，we should respect our parents and help them do some housework．（尊敬父母，帮助他们做家务）Second，we should be polite and honest．Also，it's always good to be kind and friendly．We should try our best to help the people in need．【高分句型】（对人有礼貌，诚实友好，帮助他人）Third，we'd better not talk loudly in public．Don't throw rubbish everywhere．It's our duty to keep our city clean and beautiful．【高分句型】（不在公共场所大声讲话，不乱扔垃圾）Fourth，we are supposed to save food and water．（节约粮食，节约用水）Lastly，it's important and necessary for us to help protect the environment．【高分句型】（保护环境）
In a word，good manners can make a difference and lead to a better future．（总结）

点评 本题要求以"文明礼仪伴我行"为主题写一篇参赛征文，根据提纲提示，本文要从在家、在学校、在公共场所及节约粮食、水等等方面进行写作．要求要包含提纲中提示的所有信息，并作必要的发挥．短文用第一人称，用一般现在时态，可以适当用一些含情态动词：should，can等等句子帮助表达责任与义务．短文要作到思想健康，主旨鲜明突出．写作亮点：本文用first，second，third，fourth，lastly等等列出中学生如何做到"文明礼仪伴我行"，层次清楚，要点分明．文中多次用到情态动词should，明确人们的责任与义务，主旨鲜明，重点突出．文中使用的不定式作主语的结构，had better，be supposed to等结构都为本文增色不少．