Question

9．生活中每个人都有与他人沟通交流的体验，如：与家人、朋友等．请根据下面的要求写一篇不少于80词的短文（文中不得出现真实的人名和校名）．
要求：
1．表达你对沟通的理解；
2．描述自身经历或社会现象中在沟通方面存在的问题；
3．参考下面的思维导图，提出至少一点更好地与人沟通的办法．

Communication is a basic ability to get on well with others．It play an important role in our daily life．
When friends are eating dinner together，most of them just surf the Internet on the phone without any communication．
They may feel bored to that they won't get together any more．In addition，some students always get into trouble with others，so they have no friends and so on．All these problems are caused by lack of communication．
In my opinion，if they learn to talk with others more，share ideas and feelings with others or be a good listener sometimes，they will communicate better with each other．The better you communicate with others，the more friends you will have．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是谈谈生活中沟通方面的问题和与人沟通的方法．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．表达你对沟通的理解；
2．描述自身经历或社会现象中在沟通方面存在的问题；
3．提出更好地与人沟通的办法（至少一点））
常用到的重点短语：
get on with sb 与某人相处
not…any more 不再
in addition 另外
the+比较级，the+比较级  越…，就越…
【高分句型】
1．①When friends are eating dinner together，most of them just surf the Internet on the phone ②without any communication．
①when引导的时间状语从句．
②without介词，没有…
2．①In my opinion，②if they learn to talk with others more，share ideas and feelings with others or be a good listener sometimes，they will communicate better with each other．
①In my opinion依我看来，插入语，提出自己的观点．
②if引导的条件状语从句，主将从现．
3．The better you communicate with others，the more friends you will have．
the+形容词或副词比较级，the+比较级，常表示"越…，就越…"，是一个复合句，其中前面的句子是状语从句，后面的句子是主句．

解答 Communication is a basic ability to get on well with others．It play an important role in our daily life． （对沟通的理解）
    When friends are eating dinner together，most of them just surf the Internet on the phone without any communication．【高分句型】
   They may feel bored to that they won't get together any more．In addition，some students always get into trouble with others，so they have no friends and so on．All these problems are caused by lack of communication．（社会现象中在沟通方面存在的问题）
   In my opinion，if they learn to talk with others more，share ideas and feelings with others or be a good listener sometimes，they will communicate better with each other．【高分句型】The better you communicate with others，the more friends you will have．【高分句型】（提出更好地与人沟通的办法）

点评 图表类作文写作之前考生首先要认真审题，确定文章的中心．表格内容要全部包括在作文中，词数要符合要求．句式表达要正确，注意句子的主谓宾、主系表等结构．文章结构要清晰．考生在平时的英语学习中需牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理，也可为文章增色不少．