Question

8．你校开展"How to Deal with the Exam Stress"征文比赛，请你根据表格中提示的内容，写一篇英语短文．

适当的压力	•积极思考，认真学习； •及时复习，防止遗忘；
过重的压力	•无法入睡，非常疲倦； •害怕考试，导致失败；
应对的措施	•合理计划，准备充分； •…（至少两条）

要求：1．用上所给要点，并适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
2．词数80左右，短文首句已给出，不计入总词数；
3．文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名．
How to Deal with the Exam Stress
Everyone may have the exam stress．A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us．If we have proper stress，we can think actively and work harder．Besides it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them．So we can pass the exams easily．
However，if we have too heavy stress，we can't sleep well at night and we may feel too tired．We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end．
In my opinion，to deal with stress，we'd better plan and prepare well．We should also form some good habits，such as enough exercise and healthy diets．Then we'll feel relaxed and do well in the exams．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是以How to Deal with the Exam Stress为题介绍如何解决考试带来的压力．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．适当的压力；•积极思考，认真学习；•及时复习，防止遗忘；
2．过重的压力；•无法入睡，非常疲倦；•害怕考试，导致失败；
3．应对的措施；合理计划，准备充分…

常用到的重点短语：
remind sb to do sth 提醒某人做某事
in the end 最终
deal with 处理
had better do sth 最好做某事
such as 例如
do well in擅长
【高分句型】
1．If we have proper stress，we can think actively and work harder．
if引导的条件状语从句，主句含有情态动词can，从句用一般现在时代替一般将来时
2．Besides it can①remind us to review our lessons in time ②to remember them．
①remind sb to do sth 提醒某人做某事，in time 及时
②动词不定式做目的状语．
3．①In my opinion，②to deal with stress，③we'd better plan and prepare well．
①in my opinion 依我看来，提出自己的观点．
②动词不定式做目的状语．
③had better do sth 最好做某事

解答 How to Deal with the Exam Stress
Everyone may have the exam stress．A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us．If we have proper stress，we can think actively and work harder．【高分句型】Besides it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them．【高分句型】So we can pass the exams easily．（适当的压力；积极思考，认真学习；及时复习，防止遗忘）
However，if we have too heavy stress，we can't sleep well at night and we may feel too tired．We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end．（过重的压力；无法入睡，非常疲倦；害怕考试，导致失败）
In my opinion，to deal with stress，we'd better plan and prepare well【高分句型】．We should also form some good habits，such as enough exercise and healthy diets．Then we'll feel relaxed and do well in the exams．（应对的措施；合理计划，准备充分；养成良好的习惯）

点评 这是一篇给材料作文，介绍如何解决考试带来的压力．结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：A little bit of stress can be…；it can remind us to…；if we have…及we'd better…等句式的应用．写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用．写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要用题目要求的提纲内容．