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7.三年的初中生活,你对自己的表现一定有满意的方面和不满意的方面.假如你是林微,请参照以下提示,给你的学弟学妹们用英语写一篇毕业留言,希望对他们有所帮助.
提示内容提示词
对自己满意的方面勤学好问,养成良好的学习习惯;…work hard,a good habit of
对自己不满意的方面忙于学习,锻炼身体较少;…be busy,do less sports
对学弟学妹的建议或希望乐于助人,积极参加志愿者活动;…be glad to,volunteer activities
注意:1参照提示适当发挥;
2文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名;
3词数80词左右(开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数).
Dear boys and girls,
I'm Linwei.It's my honor to share what I have got and lost in the past three years.                   
Thank you my teachers and schoolmates.Wish my school more beautiful,and my teachers and schoolmates happy life!
Yours,
Linwei.

分析 高分句型一:In the future I hope you should be glad to help others if someone is in trouble在将来,如果有人有麻烦,我希望你们乐于帮助别人.这是由hope引导的宾语从句,省略了引导词that;后面是if引导的条件状语从句,要遵循主将从现的原则;be in trouble处于麻烦中.
高分句型二:I also hope you all can take an active part in some volunteer activities,such as being a volunteer in protecting the environment,in helping old people and so on.我也希望你们都能积极参加一些志愿者活动,比如做环保志愿者,帮助老人等等.这是由hope引导的宾语从句,省略了引导词that;take an active part in在…起积极作用;such as例如.

解答 Dear boys and girls,
It's my honor to share what I have got and lost in the past three years. I am hard-working and have made great progress.I have developed many good habits of learning.I did well in the exams.(对自己满意的方面)However,I have problems,too.I spent more time online and I have become quite weak in my eyesight.What's more,it's also a pity that I did less sports because of hard work.(对自己不满意的方面)
In the future I hope you should be glad to help others if someone is in trouble.(高分句型一)I also hope you all can take an active part in some volunteer activities,such as being a volunteer in protecting the environment,in helping old people and so on.(高分句型二)(对学弟学妹的建议或希望)
Thank you my teachers and schoolmates.Wish my school more beautiful,and my teachers and schoolmates happy life!
                                                              Yours,
                                                                Linwei

点评 (1)句型多样化,不要I(We)…到底,使人觉得乏味.(2)适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句.(3)进一步描绘人或事物时,适当使用定语从句.(4)适当使用分词或分词短语,烘托谓语动词.(5)偶尔使用一下倒装句,增加新鲜感.

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