Question

15．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Ella最近来信，介绍了她过圣诞节的情况，并询问你在即将到来的春节里的安排．请根据以下提示，用英语写一封回信．
1．陪伴家人；      2．拜访亲友；      3．看电视节目；   4．做功课．
注意：
1．应适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2．词数60左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Ella，
Thank you for telling me so much about your Christmas activities．Now I'd like to tell you my．
                                                                         
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Besides，I'm going to call on some of my relatives and friends，whom I haven't seen for a long time．另外，我将会拜访我的一些我很久没见的亲友
whom引导的非限制定语从句，修饰前面的 some of my relatives and friends．
【高分句型二】
I want to watch several football and NBA basketball matches on TV，especially the ones in which I can see my favorite players play我想在电视上观看一些足球和NBA篮球赛，特别是我能看见我最喜欢的运动员的．
which 引导的定语从句，修饰前面的the ones．

解答 Dear Ella，
          Thank you for telling me so much about your Christmas activities．Now I'd like to tell you my plan for the coming Spring Festival．
          I have decided to go back home to spend the happy hours with my family members．（陪伴家人；）Besides，I'm going to call on some of my relatives and friends，whom I haven't seen for a long time．（拜访亲友）【高分句型一】
           You know I'm a sports fan．I want to watch several football and NBA basketball matches on TV，especially the ones in which I can see my favorite players play．（看电视节目）【高分句型二】
          Most importantly，I will finish all my homework．And I plan to spend more time improving my English．（做功课）
         Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．