Question

【题目】书面表达

根据所给图画，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。提示词：regret v．感到后悔，感到抱歉

Answer 1

【答案】

Xiaomao was on the way home from school and saw a little brother accidentally fell down. He was crying. Xiaomao stepped forward to help him up and asked where his home was. He put him on his back to send him to go home, At the door of the house, the boy's mother came out, seeing their children cry. He thought Xiaomao bully her son, She was very angry and beat Xiaomao. His son told his mother that he fell off himself and the boy sent him home. The mother was very sorry, hurriedly gave Xiaomao an apology, and said "thank you" to him.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本题材料是四幅图画。动笔前应认真看图，了解图画内容，展开合理想象。然后根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。根据图画内容可知本文讲述了一个我们生活中屡见不鲜的现象，主要为一个男孩救助了一名儿童，被儿童的家人误会，然后在儿童的帮助下弄清误会，家人向这个男孩道歉的故事。根据内容可知本文人称以第三人称较多，时态一般应该用一般过去时。

写作亮点：此类作文首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依。

用到一些好的语句如：He put him on his back to send him to go home；At the door of the house, the boy's mother came out, seeing their children cry给文章增色不少。