Question

【题目】书面表达（满分10分）

请介绍一下你自己学习英语的情况。短文要求80词左右，可以适当增加细节。

1． 学英语多长的时间。

2． 在学习英语方面遇到的最大困难。

3． 如何克服困难的。

4． 目前的状况如何。

5． 对学习英语的看法。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Talking About English Learning

English is spoken by many people in the world. It’s becoming more and more useful and important in our daily life.

I have learned English for many years. In class, I try to listen to the teacher carefully and speak English more. After class, first I go over the lessons. Then I listen to tapes, watch English programs on TV, read English, take part in the English corner and so on. I study so hard that I’m good at it now.

By the way, here are some suggestions for you. First, believe yourself and try to read or speak English loudly. Second, learn English words and useful phrases or sentences by heart. Third, try to use English as much as possible.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，让我们根据所给材料写一封邀请信，邀请全班同学参加一个活动，材料中有详细的时间及活动安排，我们要用正确的时态按照时间顺序把这一天的行程表达清楚。通过分析可知，本篇短文应主要用一般将来时，第一人称复数表达。写作时注意行文连贯，表达清楚，不要遗漏要点。并且多使用好的短语和句型以使文章流畅。

写作亮点：这篇作文写得比较清楚，详细，对材料中的时间及活动安排表达的很清楚，并且按时间顺序交代了这一天的行程。写作的人称和时态都切合题意。并且文中也用了一些较好的句型，这些句型的使用使文章流畅，富有条理。