Question

【题目】书面表达

某英文报以An Unforgettable Day (《难忘的一天》) 为题，面向中学生开展征文活动，请你写一篇短文参加此次活动。

内容包括：

1、哪一天让你感到难忘；

2、什么事（开心的、伤心的或是有特别意义的）让你感到那天难忘；

3、那一天你经历了什么；

4、那天的经历对你有什么影响或者你有什么感受。

要求： 1、80-100 词；

2、文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。

Answer 1

【答案】

An Unforgettable Day

I’ll never forget June 11th, 2012. It was a sunny day. On the way to school, my friend did something rude to me. It made me sad. What’s worse, I got a “C” in my favorite subject.

After school, I went home unhappily. It was dark in the room. Suddenly the lights were on, and I heard the song “Happy birthday”. I was surprised to see many people and a big cake. “Oh, it’s my birthday.” I was so excited and happy. It was my first time to have a birthday party.

I’ll never forget that day.

【解析】

试题分析：本文内容要求你以“An Unforgettable Day ”为题写一篇短文。我们首先应该确定用一般过去时态，本文应用第一人称。灵活采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：本文时态使用准确，叙事流畅，内容表达清晰，使用了不少固定结构，如：on the way to..., something rude, what’s more; be surprised to do, it’s my first time to do sth.等。文中还使用after that等词为短文增色不少,将来时态的使用十分恰当。