Question

【题目】书面表达

86.假如你是晨光中学的学生李华，平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点，描述你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情，并表达自己的想法。

(l) 一个男孩不舒服，开始呕吐，一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面，男孩表达感谢。

(2) 地铁到站，有人挤向座位，有人下不去车，有人因此争吵。

(3) 你认为…．

参考词汇： 开始呕吐 begin to vomit

挤向座位 push towards the seat

争吵havea quarrel

要求：

(1)词数：80～100个。

(2)日记格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数

(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥

Wednesday

When I took the underground back home from school, I noticed

Answer 1

【答案】Wednesday When I took the underground back home after school.I noticed a boy who felt not very well and whose face was pale.I was wondering what's wrong with him when he suddenly began to vomit.Seeing this scene, a lady who wore beautiful dress not only gave a helping hand but also cleaned the floor without hesitate.And then the boy expressed gratitude with a low bow.

As time passed by, the subway arrived.Someone pushed toward the seat while others can't get off，therefore they had a quarrel angrily.

From my perspective,I wish we all can help each other when somcone is in trouble just like the beautiful lady and be polite all the time.Only in this way can our world become better and better.

【解析】

这是一篇日记，根据材料中的相关信息用英语写一篇日记。所提供的材料中列举了你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情，主要从(l) 一个男孩不舒服，开始呕吐，一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面，男孩表达感谢。(2) 地铁到站，有人挤向座位，有人下不去车，有人因此争吵。(3) 你认为…。写出自己的想法。这几个方面去写。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

I noticed a boy who felt not very well and whose face was pale. 我注意到一个男孩感觉不太好，脸色苍白。

句子who felt not very well是由who引导的定语从句。

【高分句型二】

Seeing this scene, a lady who wore beautiful dress not only gave a helping hand but also cleaned the floor without hesitate. 看到这一幕，一位穿着漂亮衣服的女士不仅伸出援助之手，而且毫不犹豫地打扫了地板。

句子who wore beautiful dress是由who引导的定语从句。该句话还运用了not only…but also…：不但……而且……。

【高分句型三】

Only in this way can our world become better and better. 只有这样，我们的世界才能变得越来越好。

这句话是由only引起的倒装句。