Question

7．你的朋友Tom昨天与父母发生了争吵．起因是Tom没有与父母分担家务．他现在很苦恼，不知道该怎么做．请你给Tom提出至少两点建议以及为什么建议他这样做．
要求：1．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3．词数：60-80个．（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Tom，
I heard you argued with your parents yesterday，because you didn't help with the housework．                   

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①So，you should learn to do some housework now．所以，你现在应该学会做家务．句子中learn to do sth学习做某事，后面跟to引导的动词不定式形式；do some housework 表示做家务．
②So I think it is good for students to do some housework．所以我认为学生做一些家务是有好处的．句子中think后面跟的是一个宾语从句；it is good for sb to do sth对某人来说做某事是有好处的．

解答 Dear Tom，
    I heard you argued with your parents yesterday，because you didn't help with the housework．Is it good for students to do some housework？（引出话题）Some people think students need not do any housework．They think the only thing students need do is to study well．（一些人对此的看法）I don't think so．It is good for students to do some housework for three reason．（我的看法）
    First，to do some housework can make you independent．You can't depend on others all your life．So，you should learn to do some housework now．（高分句型）Second，to do some housework can keep you healthy and strong，some hard housework can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise．Finally，to do some housework can share your parents'work．They must be happy if you say"Have a rest，and I will do the housework"（我给Tom的建议建议及原因）
    So I think it is good for students to do some housework．（高分句型）（结束语）

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