题目内容
12.剪纸是中国传统的技艺之一,请根据以下提示信息写一篇短文,70~80 词.1 剪纸只需要用到剪刀和纸,受到人们的喜爱;
2 剪纸有各种形状,如人物、动物、花和吉祥的汉字等;
3 人们经常在节日贴剪纸,因为人们认为它们能带来幸福和好运;
4 我们应该保护好这项传统技艺.
分析 高分句型一
Paper cutting is one of the traditional Chinese Arts.剪纸是中国传统的技艺之一.one of….…之一,注意后跟名词的复数.
高分句型二
We should try our best to protect this traditional skill.我们应该尽力保护这一传统技艺.句子中try one's best表示尽力做某事,后面跟to引导的不定式短语.
解答 Paper cutting is one of the traditional Chinese Arts.【高分句型一,注意one of 的使用】Paper cutting only need to use scissors and paper,so people enjoy doing it in their daily life【要点一,剪纸只需要用到剪刀和纸,受到人们的喜爱】.Paper cutting can be made in different shapes,such as figures,animals,flowers and Chinese characters with good meanings【要点二,剪纸有各种形状,如人物、动物、花和吉祥的汉字等】.People often put them up on the windows,doors as well as walls on festivals because they think paper cutting can bring them happiness and good luck.【要点三,人们经常在节日贴剪纸,因为人们认为它们能带来幸福和好运】
We should try our best to protect this traditional skill.【高分句型二,注意try的使用】【要点四,我们应该保护好这项传统技艺】
点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点,不可遗漏.需在平时积累相关的词汇,写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系.上下文之间可以适当使用连接词.