Question

19．Write a passage of at least 60words about the topic"A Ten-minute Break"．（以十分钟的休息时间"为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格．）
提示：进人初三以来，同学们倍感学习任务重，压力大．许多同学争分夺秒甚至连课间十分钟的休息时间也在看书做题．请以A Ten-minute Break为题，描写这一现象（包括你自己的做法）并针对这一现象谈谈你的看法．
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分．）
I am a Grade 9 student，there is so much homework that I use ten-minute breaks to do homework．After a long time，I felt I was too tired to focus on the following lessons．I decided to change my timetable．After class，I will walk around and have a rest and give up doing homework during the ten-minute breaks．I find I have a clear mind to listen to my teachers carefully．In a word，I think we should have a rest during a ten-minute break so that we will concentrate well in the next class．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
there is so much homework that I have to use ten-minute breaks to do homework．作业太多了，我必须用课间十分钟来做作业．so…that…"如此…以至于…"引导结果状语从句
【高分句型二】I find I have a clear mind to listen to my teachers carefully．我发现我可以保持清醒的头脑来认真听老师讲课．（句子中的carefully是副词，修饰前面的动词listen）

解答 I am a Grade 9 student，there is so much homework that I have to use ten-minute breaks to do homework．【高分句型一】After a long time，I felt I was too tired to focus on the following lessons．I decided to change my timetable．After class，I will walk around and have a rest and give up doing homework during the ten-minute breaks．I find I have a clear mind to listen to my teachers carefully．【高分句型二】In a word，I think we should have a rest during a ten-minute break so that we will concentrate well in the next class．

点评 解答这种题目时，我们应该仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点． 要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写． 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯． 在平常的学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，让文章更出彩．