Question

11．汽车自诞生以来，大大改变了人类的生活．请你根据自己的看法，写一篇80词左右的文章，谈谈汽车的利与弊．
内容包括：
1．汽车给我们带来了很多好处，使我们的生活变得更便利；
2．汽车同时也给我们带来了很多问题，如车祸、交通堵塞、大气污染以及噪音污染等等；
3．谈谈你对当今酒驾的看法．并提出一些有利于环保的建议．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：As we know cars has greatly changed our life since they came into use．as引导的原因状语从句，引出文章的一个观点，汽车为我们提供了方便．
句型二：so it is very easy to cause traffic accidents．it is+形容词 to do sth句型：it是形式主语，真正的主语是后面的动词不定式短语 to cause traffic accidents，形容词easy是用来作表语的．

解答 As we know cars has greatly changed our life since they came into use【高分句型一】．And they bring us much convenience and make it easier to travel everywhere．（说出车给人们带来的好处）They can also save our time to do many things．But they also bring trouble to us．First many traffic accidents often happen．Second they have to waste much gas and also pollute the air．So we should consider our environment before buying cars．Drunk driving is a kind of illegal behavior，so it is very easy to cause traffic accidents．【高分句型二】Don't drive a car if you drink the wine．（最直接的提醒）            
With the development of the society in the 21st century，most of the people want to live a green low-carbon life and they pay more attention to the environmental protection and the energy saving，so the development of electromobiles exactly conforms the demand of the environmental protection．（将来发展趋势）

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