Question

【题目】当代雷锋郭明义，在《幸福就这么简单》一书中，用自己的点滴平凡小事诠释出幸福的 真谛。幸福就围绕在我们身边，简单得触手可得，平凡得召之即来。那你的幸福观又是什么 呢？请以 My Happiness 为题写一篇短文。

内容包括以下方面：

1. 你认为幸福是什么？

2. 描述一件令你感到幸福的事（需交代时间、地点、过程与感受）。

3. 以自己的感悟揭示：应该如何创造幸福。

写作要求：

1. 短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑；

2. 卷面干净整洁；

3. 词数 80 左右；

4. 开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

My Happiness

After reading Guo Mingyi’s “Happiness Is So Simple”, I am deeply moved by his view on happiness. As for me,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.

I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.

I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents.

【解析】

幸福就围绕在我们身边，简单得触手可得，平凡得召之即来，这篇作文要求写一写自己的幸福观，描述自己对于幸福的定义，描述一件到幸福的事，最后谈谈应该如何创造幸福，要注意叙述流畅，在描述过去的幸福往事的时候要注意正确使用时态，可以使用到的短语表达有：happiness is always around you 幸福总在你身边；put your heart into it 把你的心投入其中；had a bad mark at a math test 数学考试成绩很差；afraid to meet my parents 害怕见家长；got back home late 回家晚；be always beside you一直在你身旁；need help需要帮助；Never give up永不放弃；made up my mind to下定决心去做…；in trouble有困难。总体来说这篇文章分为三大段，条理清晰，叙述完整，完成了既定的写作任务。