题目内容
【题目】一个快乐的人总能发现生活的美妙和乐趣。但是怎样才能让自己成为一个真正快乐的人呢?你和几位好朋友有不同的看法。请根据下面表格中的内容,以“What makes one happy?”为题写一篇报道,给你校的校报投稿。
Who | What makes one happy | Why |
Matt | 学业上取得进步 和很多人交朋友 | 变得更努力 泄气时给你鼓励,带来快乐 |
Dave | 发展兴趣爱好 参加学校活动 | 提高自己 充实生活 |
You | …… | …… |
要求:1. 短文必须包括以上表格的提示内容,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 文章中有关“你”的部分内容,须用2-3句话展开合理想象,做适当发挥;
3.90词左右,短文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
What makes one happy?
A happy person can always find the beauty and pleasure of life. But how can you make yourself become a truly happy person? A few friends and I have different opinions.
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【答案】A happy person can always find the beauty and pleasure of life. But how can you make yourself become a truly happy person? A few friends and I have different opinions.
Matt thinks that making some progress in schoolwork can make him happy because it can make him more hard-working. He also thinks making friends with many people can make him happy too because friends always encourage him whenever he loses heart. And they always bring him happiness.
In Dave’s opinion, developing different hobbies and taking part in school activities can make him happy. In this way, he can improve himself and make his life colorful and interesting.
To me, I think good health can make me happy. When I’m healthy, I’m energetic enough to do everything well.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文。要求以“What makes one happy?”为题,根据表格中所给出的材料内容写一篇报道。文章时态用一般现在时,人称主要用第一、第三人称。首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。在写作时,注意连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性;要将表格内提示信息用英语正确的表达出来,要涵盖表格中提到的所有要点,同时注意理顺要点,防止漏写。要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;词汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为文章增色添彩。最后,要仔细检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。
【题目】每个人都有自己喜欢的音乐。请你根据下列表格内容,介绍你的三个朋友喜欢的音乐类型及原因,并介绍你自己喜欢的音乐及原因.
Name | What kind of music | Reason(s) |
Ann | soft music | graceful(优雅的) |
Jim | rock music | Fast;can dance to it |
Monica | pop music | Great lyrics: can sing along with it |
I | ...... | ...... |
要求:要点完整,层次清楚,语法正确,词数90词左右。
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