题目内容
【题目】写作
读万卷书,行万里路。旅行是真正的知识最伟大的发源地。你热爱旅行吗?请与我们分享你的一次旅行的经历。
要求:
1. 文章不得出现真实的人名和校名。
2. 内容完整,结构合理,语言准确。
3. 字数:不少于80字。
【答案】例文:
I love traveling. Traveling can open my eyes to the world. I have been to Disneyland and experience what it's like to be "a child again!" And also I have visited one of the "seven wonders" of the world, such as the Great Wall and feel the beauty of nature.
What I remember well was that I traveled to Sanya of Hainan Province last year. It is really a beautiful city with trees and flowers all around. Driving on the road, I could feel the sea touching my face. It was rather cold in mainland China. But it was still hot there. I visited some beautiful places. I bought a lot of fruits there, such as the coco. They are so delicious that I miss them very much.
Traveling is a very good way to gain my experience. It makes me come into different cultures, meet people of different colors. Not only can I learn more knowledge, but also I can enjoy the life.
【解析】
题干解读:
该题目属于记叙文写作。例文采用三段式;用第一人称来叙述故事内容;时态采用一般过去时为主,用过去进行时描述场景,一般现在时为辅,介绍自己的态度;描述故事时,场景描写细致;故事发生的背景、起因和过程等叙述完整且条理清晰。第一段写作者对于旅游的态度和去过哪里。第二段着重介绍三亚所闻所感。最后一段回应开头,讲了旅游的好处。
高分亮点:
have been to 去过某地;one of ……之一;such as 例如;a very good way to 一种做……的好方法;makes me do 让某人做……
美句:
Driving on the road, I could feel the sea touching my face. 现在分词做伴随状语;
They are so delicious that I miss them very much. 如此……以至于……结果状语从句
Not only can I learn more knowledge, but also I can enjoy the life. 倒装句。