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17.时下网上购物非常热门,许多中小学生也都加入了这一行列.你怎么看待这个问题,请结合身边的例子谈谈你的看法.
写作要点:1.网上购物很流行,许多中小学生也都参与进去.
2.我的观点(赞同/反对)
3.希望同学们购物时慎重,当心受骗.
温馨提示:
1.短文内容应包含所提示的要点,语言流畅,不要逐字翻译,可适当发挥;
2.短文字数不少于80词,短文开头已替你写好,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现与考生本人相关的真实的人名、校名和地名.
参考词汇:网上购物:on-line shopping流行/热门:popular/welcome (adj.)
The Internet is playing a more and more important role in people's life.It greatly affects people's life in many ways.Online shopping is one of the examples.Online shopping is becoming so popular that you'll be regarded as a fool if you don't know how to shop on the Internet.The middle school studentsof course?wouldn't like to be left behind the fashion.Though I can't say no to this,yet I think teens should keep calm when they find so many cheap things on the Internet.The quality of the things can't be promised behind the cheap price.What's worse,spending your money on the Internet may be dangerous,for there are many cheats on the Internet.So I do suggest all people should take great care while doing online shopping.

分析 这是一篇提纲作文.内容是谈谈你对网上购物的看法.时态主要为一般现在时.人称主要为第一、三人称.
写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:
1.网上购物很流行,许多中小学生也都参与进去.
2.我的观点(赞同/反对)
3.希望同学们购物时慎重,当心受骗.

常用到的重点短语:
be regarded as 被视作…
on the Internet 网络上
of course 当然
leave behind 落后
what's worse 更糟糕的是
【高分句型】
1.Online shopping is becoming①so popular that you'll ②be regarded as a fool③if you don't know④how to shop on the Internet.
①so…that,如此…以致于,that引导的结果状语从句.
②be regarded as 被视作…
③if引导的条件状语从句.
④疑问词+to do sth 作为know的宾语.
2.①What's worse,②spending your money on the Internet may be dangerous,③for there are many cheats on the Internet.
①what's worse 更糟糕的是.
②动名词短语作主语,spend+时间+on sth 花钱做某事
③for因为,引导原因状语从句.

解答 The Internet is playing a more and more important role in people's life.It greatly affects people's life in many-ways.Online shopping is one of the examples.Online shopping is becoming so popular that you'll be regarded as a fool if you don't know how to shop on the Internet.【高分句型】The middle school students,of course,wouldn't like to be left behind the fashion.(网上购物很流行,许多中小学生也都参与进去)
Though I can't say no to this,yet I think teens should keep calm when they find so many cheap things on the Internet.The quality of the things can't be promised behind the cheap price.What's worse,spending your money on the Internet may be dangerous,for there are many cheats on the Internet.【高分句型】So I do suggest all people should take great care while doing online shopping.(我的观点以及希望同学们慎重)

点评 这是一篇提纲作文.考生在把握了文章的中心后,应在内心构思一个基本的框架,并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型,以充分地表达文章的内容.尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容,避免使用无把握或偏、难句型.注意所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯

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