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5．小明班级将要出一期"低碳生活"为主题的英语板报，请小明写一份"低碳生活"的倡议书，倡议同学们加入低碳一族．要点如下：
1．节约用水、用电、用纸；
2．去超市自备购物袋；
3．不要购买不必要的衣服；
4．步行或骑自行车上学；
5…
要求：（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
（2）词数在80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
参考词汇：
低碳low-carbon； 一次性的one-off
With the global warming getting worse，more people choose to live a low-carbon life for the purpose of reducing greenhouse gases．As students，we can choose to live a low-carbon life，too．In our daily life，we should save water，electricity and paper．Remember to turn off the water tap or reuse water．We're supposed to use both sides of the paper．We ought to turn off the lights when we leave a room．We can bring our own shopping bags when we go to the supermarket．Don't buy unnecessary clothes because it is a kind of waste．Don't buy cups，bowls or chopsticks which can be used only once．If possible，we'd better go to school on foot or by bike．
Let's take action and be a low-carbon people!
Let's take actions and be a low-carbon people!

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容为倡议你的同学们加入低碳一族．时态为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从五方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．节约用水、用电、用纸；
2．去超市自备购物袋；
3．不要购买没必要的衣服；
4．步行或骑自行车上学．
5．其他
常用到的重点句型和短语：
remember to do sth记得去做某事
be supposed to应该
if possible如果可能的话
had better do sth最好做某事
【高分句型】
1．①Don't buy cups，bowls or chopsticks②which can③be used only once．
①否定祈使句，don't+动词原形．
②定语从句，which是关系词做从句的主语，修饰前面的cups，bowls or chopsticks．
③情态动词的被动语态：情态动词+be+过去分词．
2．①If possible，②we'd better go to school on foot or by bike．
①if possible如果可能的话，省略句，完整表达是if it is possible．
②had better do sth最好做某事

解答 With the global warming getting worse，more people choose to live a low-carbon life for the purpose of reducing greenhouse gases．
As students，we can choose to live a low-carbon life，too．In our daily life，we should save water，electricity and paper．Remember to turn off the water tap or reuse water．We're supposed to use both sides of the paper．We ought to turn off the lights when we leave a room．（节约用水、用电、用纸）We can bring our own shopping bags when we go to the supermarket．（去超市自备购物袋））Don't buy unnecessary clothes because it is a kind of waste．（不要购买没必要的衣服）Don't buy cups，bowls or chopsticks which can be used only once．【高分句型】（其它：不买一次性的碗筷）If possible，we'd better go to school on foot or by bike．（步行或骑自行车上学）【高分句型】
     Let's take action and be a low-carbon people!（号召）

点评 本篇作文由于提纲材料本身决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等，命题者的意图往往较容易领悟，考生在审题上一般不会出现障碍．可根据内容要点提示运用相关的句型结构灵活的展开作文．考生需注意不要逐词逐句地进行翻译，所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．