Question

3．随着互联网的发展，网上购物（Online Shoppmg）已经变得越来越受欢迎．请根据以下内容，用英语写一篇短文，描述网上购物的利与弊．

一些人喜欢网购	一些人喜欢去商店购物
优势（advantages）	劣势（disadvantages）
可以随时购物	只看见图片，看不到实物
足不出户，节省时间	衣服不能试穿
商品便宜，可以省钱	不够安全

参考词汇：without going out，save time，compare，try on．damage
要求：（1）词数80～100个
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥．
Online shopping
With the development of the Internet，online shopping is becoming more and more popular these years．
We can buy almost everything on the Internet and receive it in a few days by post．
There are many advantages of online shopping．First of all，we could do shopping at any time．The shops are always open．Second，we can shop without going out and we won't be tired，also online shopping takes less time．Finally，we can save money．The prices online are usually much lower．
However，some people like to shop with their friends．They think they can only see pictures instead of real products．【高分句型】They can't try the clothes on，either．Also it is not safe to shop online
However，online shopping is changing our way of life．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是描述网上购物的利与弊．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1优势（1）可以随时购物；（2）足不出户，节省时间；（3）商品便宜，可以省钱
2劣势：（1）只看见图片，看不到实物；（2）衣服不能试穿；（3）不够安全
常用到的重点短语：
first of all 首先
go out 出门
instead of 而不是
try on 试穿
【高分句型】
1．Second，we can shop without going out and we won't be tired，also online shopping takes less time．
without介词表示没有…，后加名词代词或动名词
2．They think①they can only see pictures②instead of real products．
①think 后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句
②instead of 而不是，of是介词，后加名词代词或动名词．
3．Also it is not safe to shop online．
it是形式主语，动词不定式是真正主语．

解答 With the development of the Internet，online shopping is becoming more and more popular these years．We can buy almost everything on the Internet and receive it in a few days by post．
    There are many advantages of online shopping．First of all，we could do shopping at any time．The shops are always open．（可以随时购物）Second，we can shop without going out and we won't be tired，also online shopping takes less time．（足不出户，节省时间）【高分句型】Finally，we can save money．The prices online are usually much lower．（商品便宜，可以省钱）
    However，some people like to shop with their friends．They think they can only see pictures instead of real products．（只看见图片，看不到实物）【高分句型】They can't try the clothes on，either．（衣服不能试穿）Also it is not safe to shop online．【高分句型】（不够安全）
    However，online shopping is changing our way of life．

点评 对同一件事情，人们往往有不同的看法，即正反两种观点．在写作时，常使用一般现在时．写作格式一般是：提出问题→两种不同观点→对两种不同观点的论据（理由）逐项作对比．如果要求说出自己的观点，可在结尾段加上自己的观点并简要说明理由，最好不要重复前面的理由．
考生不能遗漏要点要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数．考生注意使用过渡词或者过渡句来使文章读起来比较流畅．