题目内容
13.俗话说:"予人玫瑰,手留余香."在我们的日常生活中,我们会遇到各种困难,因 此,我们会需要他人的帮助,但同时,我们也要学会帮助他人.其实,帮助他人就是在帮 助自己.请结合身边的事例,围绕"帮助"这一话题写一篇短文.内容要点包括:
1 简单表达你对这种现象的看法.
2讲述一件你帮助别人或别人帮助你的故事,并谈谈你帮助别人或别人帮助你的感受.
3呼吁大家要尽力帮助他人,让我们生活的世界变得更美好.
文要求:
1不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名.
2语句连贯,词数 80 个左右.作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数.
As the saying goes,rose given,fragrance in hand.In our daily life,we will meet with a lot of trouble.
分析 高分句型:
①So it is necessary for us to help those who are in trouble.因此,我们有必要帮助有困难的人.句子中it is necessary for sb to do sth表示对某人来说做某事是有必要的,it作形式主语,后面的to引导的不定式短语作真正的主语.
②One day,he asked me to help him.有一天,他让我帮他.句子中ask sb to do sth表示帮着某人做某事.
解答 As the saying goes,rose given,fragrance in hand.In our daily life,we will meet with a lot of trouble.So it is necessary for us to help those who are in trouble(高分句型).(引出话题)
I still remember I helped one of my classmates with his English when we were in the first term of Junior Eight.Li Hua,one of my classmates,was not good at English while I did well.One day,he asked me to help him(高分句型).So from then on,whenever he had problems,he would ask me,and I was patient to explain them to him.Slowly,his English improved with my help.At the same time,I found my English improved too.(叙述一件帮助别人的故事以及感受)
Actually,helping others is helping ourselves,make our world a better place to live in.(呼吁)
点评 这是一篇命题作文,写一篇关于互相帮助的短文.本题给出的材料较为简略,可发挥的空间较大,所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥,利用自己熟悉的单词句式.结合所谈话题,可知本文写成记述文比较容易下手.写作中注意应用具体事例来说明相互帮助的意思.写作中,应注意描述的全面性,语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯.适当使用连词,序数词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系.
-I think they will if they free( )
| A. | go,will be | B. | will go,are | ||
| C. | go,are | D. | will go,will be. |
要求:
1.表格中所有信息必须使用,表中省略的信息自己可以补充拓展.
2.突出主题,详略得当.
3.不少于80个单词.
| 姓名 | 相同(似)之处 | 不同之处 |
| Tom | 1.个头一样高. 2.爱运动,每周锻炼两三次. 3.都很友好,乐于助人. 4.周末常去遗爱湖… | 1.你朋友文静,而你… 2.你喜欢肥皂剧,而你朋友喜欢… 3.你朋友饮食习惯健康,而你… 4.你朋友比你刻苦. |
We have some in common.Tom is as tall as me.We both like doing sports,and we will exercise together twice or three times a week.We are friendly to everyone.We think it's fun to help others
On weekends,we usually walk to Yi'ai Lake Park.The air there is the freshest in the city.We can enjoy our time quietly by taking a walk there.
However,we don't think it's necessary to be the same in everything.So there are also some differences between us.I'm funnier and more outgoing than Tom.He's quiet.I like soap operas.I think they are relaxing to watch.But Tom likes watching news.He has healthy eating habits but I don't.At school Tom is more hardworking than me,so he always gets higher grades..
要求:1.作文要包括下表中的所有信息;2.卷面整洁,字迹工整 3.语法要准确.
| 爱好特长 | 日常活动 | 喜欢的动物和原因 | |
| Tom | 唱歌、讲故事 | 6:30骑自行车上学 | 大象,因为他们很可爱 |
| Jim | 弹琴、画画 | 6:15起床、吃早饭 | 熊猫,因为害羞和友好 |
-I spend lots of time sports,sometimes I do some reading.( )
| A. | in,on | B. | in,in | C. | on,in | D. | on,on |
| A. | a; the | B. | /;/ | C. | the; the | D. | the;/ |