题目内容
4．下表是你和你最好朋友Tom的信息，请以"My best friend"为题写一篇文章介绍你的好朋友．要求：
1．表格中所有信息必须使用，表中省略的信息自己可以补充拓展．
2．突出主题，详略得当．
3．不少于80个单词．
| 姓名 | 相同（似）之处 | 不同之处 |
| Tom | 1．个头一样高． 2．爱运动，每周锻炼两三次． 3．都很友好，乐于助人． 4．周末常去遗爱湖… | 1．你朋友文静，而你… 2．你喜欢肥皂剧，而你朋友喜欢… 3．你朋友饮食习惯健康，而你… 4．你朋友比你刻苦． |
We have some in common．Tom is as tall as me．We both like doing sports，and we will exercise together twice or three times a week．We are friendly to everyone．We think it's fun to help others
On weekends，we usually walk to Yi'ai Lake Park．The air there is the freshest in the city．We can enjoy our time quietly by taking a walk there．
However，we don't think it's necessary to be the same in everything．So there are also some differences between us．I'm funnier and more outgoing than Tom．He's quiet．I like soap operas．I think they are relaxing to watch．But Tom likes watching news．He has healthy eating habits but I don't．At school Tom is more hardworking than me，so he always gets higher grades．．
分析 高分句型一
We think it's fun to help others我们认为帮助别人是有趣的．这是一个宾语从句，We think 是主句，后面的是宾语从句．
高分句型二
So there are also some differences between us所以我们之间也有一些不同之处．这是there be 句型，表示某地有某物．
解答 My best friend
Tom is my best friend．Let me tell you something between us．
We have some in common．Tom is as tall as me．We both like doing sports，and we will exercise together twice or three times a week．We are friendly to everyone．We think it's fun to help others．【高分句型一，注意宾语从句的使用】
On weekends，we usually walk to Yi'ai Lake Park．The air there is the freshest in the city．We can enjoy our time quietly by taking a walk there．【要点一，相同（似）之处】
However，we don't think it's necessary to be the same in everything．So there are also some differences between us【高分句型二，注意there be 句型的使用】．I'm funnier and more outgoing than Tom．He's quiet．I like soap operas．I think they are relaxing to watch．But Tom likes watching news．He has healthy eating habits but I don't．At school Tom is more hardworking than me，so he always gets higher grades．【要点二，不同之处】
点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．
| A． | for | B． | at | C． | to | D． | with |
| 变化内容 | 过去 | 现在 |
| 性格方面 | 性格内向，遇到困难不敢向别人求助 | 变得开朗，积极参加活动，敢于在人群前面演讲 |
| 学习方面 | 对功课不感兴趣，有时缺课，经常考试不及格 | 变得爱学习，注意学习方法，成绩进步 |
| 其他方面 | … | … |
| 父母的态度 | 父母为我担心 | 父母为我骄傲 |
1．文章必须包括表中的全部内容，可适当增加细节；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．在空白栏处补充相应信息，写出一条过去和现在的改变；
4．词数：80-100
Good morning，ladies and gentlemen，
I'm very glad to make a speech here．Today my topic is"How I've changed!"．I've really changed a lot in the past three years． ．
Thanks for your attention!
| How old is he/she？ | What is he/she？ | |
| Lily | 12 | A student |
| Lily's father | 41 | driver |
| Lily's mother | 36 | cook |
| Lily's uncle | 38 | worker |
| Lily's aunt | 29 | nurse |
Lily is my friend．
She is 12．She is a student．She works hard and she is a good student in her class．Lily's father is 41．He is a driver．So he drives her to school every day．Lily's mother is 36．She is a cook．She cooks meal for her family．Lily's uncle is 38．He is a worker．He works in a factory．Lily's aunt is 29．She is a nurse．She works in hospital．They are a happy family．．
| 过去 | 现在 | |
| 住房 | 小房子 | 大公寓 |
| 通讯 | 书信 | 手机、网络 |
| 娱乐 | 听收音机 | 看电视、玩电脑 |
| 交通 | 自行车或步行 | 自驾、地铁、公交车 |
| 感受 | … | |
2．短文连贯通顺；
3．词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数．
Changes in my hometown
Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the past few years． ．
| Name | Age | From | School | Class | Grade | Telephone number |
| Li Ming | 12 | China | Beijing No.1High School | 2 | 7 | （010）7635-2408 |
| Lily | 11 | the USA | Beijing No.3 High School | 4 | 7 | （010）8769-5417 |