题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假设在英语课上老师给你们欣赏了电影《太空大灌篮》的主题曲I Believe I Can Fly。这是一首催人奋进的励志歌曲。请你根据以下要点以“I Believe I Can Fly”为题,用英语写一篇短文表达你的感想。
内容要点:
1.这首歌告诉我们自信的重要性;
2.自信给人勇气尝试,使人成功;
3.梦想和自信使人勇于面对困难;
4.没有梦想和自信,不会获得成功。
注意:
1.词数:80左右。短文的开头已写好,不计入总词数;
2.参考词汇:自信confidence(n.);
3.短文应包括所有要点,不要逐字翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
I Believe I Can Fly
I Believe I Can Fly is a nice song by R.Kelly.
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【答案】I Believe I Can Fly
I Believe I Can Fly is a nice song by R.Kelly.
This song tells us that confidence is very important.When a person has confidence,he believes in himself.He believes that he can and will succeed,and this gives him the courage to try new things.Dreams and confidence are what keep us going on in the face of difficulties.No one can achieve success without them.If you believe you can fly,then you can really fly someday.
I think I will never give up whenever I meet difficulties. I'll remember confidence is the premise of achieving success.
【解析】这篇作文要求我们以I Believe I Can Fly为题,写一写自己在听了这首励志歌曲之后的感想。题目中给我们列出了文章的要点,包括:这首歌告诉我们自信的重要性;自信给人勇气尝试,使人成功;梦想和自信使人勇于面对困难以及没有梦想和自信,不会获得成功。我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。写作之前应注意仔细阅读题目,确定这篇短文应使用的人称、时态,并罗列出写作要点,分清段落。题目中的要点不能逐词翻译,而应变成一个一个完整的句子,将这些意思表达清楚。注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的,应从整体上考虑用哪些词汇、句型去表达,句式结构以主谓宾或主系表为主,在此基础上,可以使用一些高级句式,如并列句、复合句以及较复杂的结构,如非谓语动词、插入语等。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文章意思连贯,表达流畅。