Question

9．Write a letter in at least 60words according to the given situation on the topic"    ，we never say goodbye"．（根据情景提示，以"    ，我们永远不会说再见"为题，写一封不少于60个单词的信件．）
（注意：短文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予．评分．）
情景：初中生涯已经进入尾声，学校里一定有你难忘的老师或同学．在此分别之际，你一定有很多与他们在一起时的美好回忆，而此时此刻的离别之情也溢于言表．请给这位老师或同学写一封信，告诉他/她你此时的不舍之情．
Dearour English teacher
I'm writing this letter to thank you for your help．You are a kind and friendly teacher．One year ago，I was not good at English，so I wanted to give it up．You encouraged me and told me how to learn English well． With your help，I have made great progress． Now I am interested in English．I think I am so lucky to be your student．I learned a lot from you，I will help others like you．I hope you can relax yourself and keep healthy．．
Yours×××

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：One year ago，I was not good at English，so I wanted to give it up一年前，我不擅长英语，所以我想放弃它．be good at是一个固定短语，表示擅长于；so表示结果，give up是一个固定短语，意思是放弃．
高分句型二：With your help，I have made great progress．在你的帮助下，我取得了很大的进步．with one's help是一个固定短语，意思是在某人的帮助下；make great progress是一个固定短语，意思是取得巨大进步．

解答 Our English teacher，we never say goodbye
        I'm writing this letter to thank you for your help．You are a kind and friendly teacher（老师的好品质）．One year ago，I was not good at English，so I wanted to give it up．（高分句型一） You encouraged me and told me how to learn English well． With your help，I have made great progress．（高分句型二） Now I am interested in English．（回忆老师对我学习英语的帮助及我的变化） I think I am so lucky to be your student．I learned a lot from you，I will help others like you．I hope you can relax yourself and keep healthy．（对老师的祝福）

点评 （1）句型多样化，不要I（We）…到底，使人觉得乏味．（2）适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句．（3）进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句．（4）适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词．（5）偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感．