题目内容
14．古人云："读书破万卷，下笔如有神．"的确，读书可以开阔我们的视野，丰富我们的知识．请就这个话题，谈谈你的想法和理由，可适当给出你的建议．写作提示：1．在业余生活中，你喜欢阅读吗？2．你喜欢读什么样的书呢？
3．作为中学生的你是如何看待阅读的呢？
写作要求：1．词数：90词左右；
2．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3．要求条理清楚，语意连贯，字迹工整，可适当发挥．
Reading is my hobby．While reading，I can get a lot of happiness．When I'm free，I often read some famous books．Books are my best friends that always keep me a good company．They often give me powers．Through reading，I can enlarge my eyes as well as widen my heart．Through reading，I become more and more knowledgeable．My favorite books are Readers and VOA．Readers cover the knowledge of culture，literature，and history，so I can benefit a lot by reading it．VOA can let me know the foreign countries better．Thanks to VOA，my oral English is improving day by day．
This is my good habit that I will keep forever．．
分析 高分句型一：Books are my best friends that always keep me a good company书是我关系最好的朋友．这是一个由that引导的定语从句，先行词是best friends，故只能用that；a good company一个好伙伴．
高分句型二：This is my good habit that I will keep forever这是我的好习惯，我将永远保留它．这是一个由that引导的定语从句，先行词是my good habit，可用关系词which和that，在定语从句中充当宾语，因此可以省略．
解答 Reading is my hobby．（开篇阐明自己的观点）While reading，I can get a lot of happiness．When I'm free，I often read some famous books．Books are my best friends that always keep me a good company．（高分句型一） They often give me powers．Through reading，I can enlarge my eyes as well as widen my heart．Through reading，I become more and more knowledgeable．（分析喜欢阅读的原因）My favorite books are Readers and VOA．Readers cover the knowledge of culture，literature，and history，so I can benefit a lot by reading it．VOA can let me know the foreign countries better．Thanks to VOA，my oral English is improving day by day．（介绍读书的类型和分析原因）
This is my good habit that I will keep forever．（高分句型二）（作者的态度）
点评 （1）句型多样化，不要I（We）…到底，使人觉得乏味．（2）适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句．（3）进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句．（4）适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词．（5）偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感．
How can you keep yourselves safe？Here are some suggestions．
When there is a fire：Shout out"Fire"!Call 119!Try to find a safe exit（出口） and get away
quickly．Don't use a lift．Cover your mouth and nose with a piece of cloth．
When there is an earthquake at school：Stay calm．Follow the teachers'instructions．
Quickly move under the desk．Don't jump out of windows or run out．
When you are on the street：Wait for the green traffic light．Look left and right before
crossing the street．Don't run across the street．
When you are eating：Wash fruits and vegetables carefully before eating them．Check the
expiration dates（保质期） of the food．Don't eat the food if it looks or smells bad．
When you are at school：Take care not to fall down or hurt yourself．Don't run，jump or push while going upstairs or downstairs．Take care of yourself all the time．
任务型阅读：根据短文内容，填写下列表格（每空词数不限）．（10分）
| Suggestions on keeping yourselves safe | ||
| Situations | What you should do | What you shouldn't do |
Be on fire | Shout out"fire"!Call 119!Find a safe exit．Get away quickly．Use a piece of cloth（81）to cover your mouth and nose． | Take a lift． |
| Have an（82）earthquake（ at school）． | Stay calm．Follow the teachers'instructions． Quickly move（83）under the desk． | Jump out of windows． Run out． |
| Be on the street | Wait for the green traffic light．Look left and right before （84）crossing the street． | （85）Run across the street． |
| While eating | Wash fruits and vegetables carefully．Check the expiration dates． | Eat bad food． |
| While at school | （86）Take care of/Look after yourself at any time． | Jump，run or push while going upstairs or downstairs． |