Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是一名武汉的中学生，请根据下面的要求写一篇不少于80字的短文，不能逐字翻译。要点：

1.表哥Mike来武汉过中秋节；你们一起赏月共享月饼；

2.你们有三年没有见面了，他改变了很多，他过去很内向，现在很外向；

3.他依旧在英语学习上有困难，总觉得跟不上老师；

4.就英语学习你给他提1-2点建议。

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I’m a middle school student in Wuhan.

Answer 1

【答案】My cousin

I’m a middle school student in Wuhan. The Mid-Autumn Day is a traditional festival with a long history. My cousin Mike came to Wuhan for the Mid-Autumn Festival. We haven't seen each other for three years. We get together and enjoy the dinner together. After that we eat moon-cakes and enjoy the bright moonlight, talking about something pleasant.

I found Mike changed a lot. He used to be very introverted, but now he is very extroverted. He told me that he has difficulties in learning English and always feels unable to keep up with his teacher. I gave him two pieces of advice. Firstly, He should make full use of his spare time to do more listening and reading about English to increase vocabulary. It's widely believed that practice makes perfect. Secondly, if he comes across problems, he can turn to his teachers and classmates for help.

【解析】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如Mid-Autumn Day，each other，get together，After that，enjoy the bright moonlight，talk about，a lot，used to，keep up with，two pieces of advice，make full use of等。而He told me that he has difficulties in learning English and always feels unable to keep up with his teacher./ It's widely believed that practice makes perfect.和if he comes across problems, he can turn to his teachers and classmates for help.多种复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容；特别是Firstly, Secondly,的使用，使短文层次清晰、条理分明，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。