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11.今年眉山中考网上填报志愿.你班在班会上举行了一次填报高中志愿的讨论.一些同学认为在本市(地)高中就读比到外地高中就读有利;一些同学则认为到外地高中就读较有利.请依据下表所提供的信息,以李明的名义给校报写一篇报道.
有利因素不利因素
本地就读1.便利
2.费用少
1.周围老同学多,易结伴玩耍、上网
2.不利于独立
外地就读1.条件较好
2.住读有助于培养自主能力
1.费用高
2.生活不便,往返时间长
要求:1、字数:80词左右(开头与结尾已给出,且不计入总词数).
2、文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息.
3、可适当发挥,但必须包含表格所提供的信息,并简要表述你的观点.
4、参考词汇:condition.条件.n.;expenses.费用.n.;independent  独立的.adj.
Dear editor,
I'm a student in Class One,Crade Three.In the class meeting we had a discussion about which senior high school we'd better enter,the schools in or out of our city.Some students think it's convenient to study in our city.Studying out of our city costs lots of money and wastes much time on the way.
Other students think that the schools out of our city may have good conditions and it's helpful for students to learn to be independent.Besides,without so many old classmates out of our city,they would have less chance to play or surf the Internet together.
The discussion was exciting.I think studying in or out of our city has some advantages and disadvantages.As for me,I prefer studying in my own city.
.Yours.

分析 这是一篇图表作文.内容是以李明的名义说说在本地就读和外地就读的利与弊.时态主要为一般现在时.人称主要为第一及第三人称.
写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:
一.本地就读 有利因素1.便利2.费用少   不利因素 1.周围老同学多,易结伴玩耍、上网2.不利于独立
二.外地就读 有利因素1.条件较好2.住读有助于培养自主能力   不利因素1.费用高2.生活不便,往返时间长

常用到的重点短语:
be helpful for 对…有帮助
surf the Internet 上网
prefer doing sth 宁愿做某事
as for sb 至于某人
【高分句型】
1.Some students think①②it's convenient to study in our city.
①think后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句
②it是形式主语,动词不定式做真正主语.
2.Studying out of our city costs lots of money and wastes much time on the way.
动名词短语作主语,谓语动词用单数.
3.Besides,①without so many old classmates out of our city,they would have less chance②to play or surf the Internet together.
①without介词,除了…后加名词代词动名词.
②动词不定式做后置定语,修饰chance.

解答 Dear editor,
I'm a student in Class One,Grade Three.In the class meeting we had a discussion about which senior high school we'd better enter,the schools in or out of our city.
Some students think it's convenient to study in our city.【高分句型】(本地就读 便利 )Studying out of our city costs lots of money and wastes much time on the way.【高分句型】(外地就读 费用高 往返时间长)
Other students think that the schools out of our city may have good conditions and it's helpful for students to learn to be independent.(外地就读 有利因素1.条件较好2.住读有助于培养自主能力)Besides,without so many old classmates out of our city,they would have less chance to play or surf the Internet together.【高分句型】(本地就读 不利因素 1.周围老同学多,易结伴玩耍、上网)
The discussion was exciting.I think studying in or out of our city has some advantages and disadvantages.As for me,I prefer studying in my own city.
Yours 
Li Ming

点评 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心.注意文章文体、人称和时态.
写出顺序的词来表达文意更清楚.完成提示词时也要符合事实.温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等.
这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少.学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

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