题目内容
14.请你根据下表中提供的材料,为中学生朋友写一篇题为"Always Be Careful"的短文,并谈谈你对中学生自我安全保护的看法.| 在家 | 不要让陌生人进屋或单独出去见网友… |
| 在学校 | 不要在教室里互相追逐;运动时,注意保护自己… |
| 在路上 | 放学按时回家,遵守交通规则,不要横穿马路… |
| 我的看法: | |
(2)词数不低于80词,开头已给出,不计入字数
Always Be Careful
As a middle school student,we should try to stay away from danger.After watching TV,you are supposed to turn it off in time.If you're home alone,don't open the door for strangers easily or invite friends that you have made online to your home.
While you are at school,running after each other in the classroom can be dangerous.At the same time,you should remember to protect yourselfwhen doing sports.Once you are in the street traffic rules should be obeyed all the time.For example,never listen to music until while riding a bike,Besides,always follow the traffic lights.
In short,I think everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger..
分析 这是一篇图表作文.内容是以"Always Be Careful"为题谈谈你对中学生自我安全保护的看法.时态主要为一般现在时.人称主要为第二人称.
写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:
1.在家;不要让陌生人进屋或单独出去见网友
2.在学校;不要在教室里互相追逐;运动时,注意保护自己
3.在路上;放学按时回家,遵守交通规则,不要横穿马路
4.我的看法
常用到的重点短语:
br supposed to 应该做某事
turn off 关掉
run after 追逐
remember to do sth 记得去做某事
all the time 一直
【高分句型】
1.①If you're home alone,don't open the door for strangers easily or invite friends ②that you have made online to your home.
①if引导的条件状语从句,主句是祈使句,从句用一般现在时.
②that作为关系词的定语从句,that作为从句的宾语,修饰先行词friends.
2.①At the same time,you should②remember to protect yourself③when doing sports.
①at the same time 同时,作为插入语.
②remember to do sth 记得去做某事
③when doing sports.省略句,完整表达是when you do spotrs.
3.①Once you are in the street,traffic rules②should be obeyed all the time.
①once 一旦…就,引导时间状语从句.
②情态动词的被动语态:情态动词+be+过去分词.
解答 Always Be Careful
As a middle school student,we should try to stay away from danger.After watching TV,you are supposed to turn it off in time.If you're home alone,don't open the door for strangers easily or invite friends that you have made online to your home.【高分句型】(在家;不要让陌生人进屋或单独出去见网友)
While you are at school,running after each other in the classroom can be dangerous.At the same time,you should remember to protect yourself when doing sports.【高分句型】(在学校;不要在教室里互相追逐;运动时,注意保护自己)Once you are in the street,traffic rules should be obeyed all the time.【高分句型】For example,never listen to music while riding a bike,Besides,always follow the traffic lights.(在路上;放学按时回家,遵守交通规则,不要横穿马路)
In short,I think everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.(我的看法)
点评 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心.注意文章文体、人称和时态.运用适当的短语表达中心思想,增加作文的可读性.完成提示词时也要符合事实.温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等.
这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少.学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.
--No,I _________it last week.( )
| A. | see | B. | have seen | C. | saw |
-At 2:00p.m..I will meet him when he at the airport.( )
| A. | gets to; arrives | B. | will get to; will arrive | ||
| C. | will get to; arrives | D. | gets to; will arrive |
| 不重视课外阅读的原因 | 1.作业任务重; 2.缺少良好的阅读习惯 3.… |
| 课外阅读的益处 | 1.更多地了解世界; 2.对学习有帮助; 3.… |
| 对学校和同学们的建议 | …(至少各一条) |
2.内容必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥;
3.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
4.不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等.
At present,only a few students do some reading after class.Here are several reasons. Atpresentonlyafewstudentsdosomereadingafterclass.Hereareseveralreasons.
First of all,quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework.Still others haven't formed a habit of reading.They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.
However,reading has many benefits.Through reading we can learn more about the world.Besides,it can help us study better.Last but not least,reading can make our life more colourful.
Here are my suggestions.For one thing,teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read.For another,it's a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other..
B:Yes,please.I'm afraid I left my handbag in a taxi this morning.
A:(62)F.
B:About 50,000dollars.
A:(63)B.
B:Yes,my ID card,I think.
A:What's your name?
B:Betty White.
A:Just a moment.(64)E.
B:Yes,it's mine.Thank you so much.
A:(65)C.The taxi driver found it and brought it here.
B:Oh,what a kind person he is!I want to meet him and thank him.
| A.Nice to see you. B.Anything else? C.You're welcome. D.Excuse me. E.Is this your handbag? F.What's in your handbag? G.May I help you? |
| 有利因素 | 不利因素 | |
| 本地就读 | 1.便利 2.费用少 | 1.周围老同学多,易结伴玩耍、上网 2.不利于独立 |
| 外地就读 | 1.条件较好 2.住读有助于培养自主能力 | 1.费用高 2.生活不便,往返时间长 |
2、文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息.
3、可适当发挥,但必须包含表格所提供的信息,并简要表述你的观点.
4、参考词汇:condition.条件.n.;expenses.费用.n.;independent 独立的.adj.
Dear editor,
I'm a student in Class One,Crade Three.In the class meeting we had a discussion about which senior high school we'd better enter,the schools in or out of our city.Some students think it's convenient to study in our city.Studying out of our city costs lots of money and wastes much time on the way.
Other students think that the schools out of our city may have good conditions and it's helpful for students to learn to be independent.Besides,without so many old classmates out of our city,they would have less chance to play or surf the Internet together.
The discussion was exciting.I think studying in or out of our city has some advantages and disadvantages.As for me,I prefer studying in my own city.
.Yours.