Question

16．你的外教Mr．Beckham 想了解同学们中考后打算做些什么，他设计了一份调查问卷，以下是部分同学的假期计划．请你根据下面表格中的信息介绍你们三人在假期中的打算，关于你自己的计划需补充完整，内容可适当拓展．

Name	What to do	Where	Why
John	do something meaningful	neighborhood	help others
Mary	do housework	home	make parents less tired
I	…	…	…

注意：
（1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
（2）语言通顺、意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
（3）词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Mr．Beecham，
For the coming summer vacation，different students have different plans．All of them are interesting and meaningful．
John is going to do something for the neighborhood because he is really friendly．He likes helping others when they are in need．Mary will do housework at home so that her parents can feel less tired after work．I always pay attention to the environment．Therefore，I'm going to help to protect the environment by being a volunteer and giving out the leaflets around the city．Moreover，I plan to write a report about the air pollution in Nanjing．
In short，although we have different kinds of plans，we all want to try our best to do something important．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是介绍Mary和John和我三人在假期中的打算．时态主要为一般将来时和一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．John；为邻里做一些有意义的事情，帮助他人
2．Mary；在家做家庭作业，让父母少累
3．我的打算和理由．
常用到的重点短语：
like doing sth 喜欢做某事
feel+adj  感觉怎样
pay attention to 留意
try one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事
【高分句型】
1．He likes helping others when they are in need．
when引导的时间状语从句．in need 处于危急中
2．Mary will do housework at home so that her parents can feel less tired after work．
so that引导的目的状语从句．
3．①In short，②although we have different kinds of plans，we all want to③try our best to do ④something important．
①in short 简言之
②although引导的让步状语从句，不能与but 连用
③try one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事

解答 Dear Mr．Beckham，
For the coming summer vacation，different students have differen t plans．All of them are interesting and meaningful．
John is going to do something for the neighborhood because he is really friendly．He likes helping others when they are in need．【高分句型】（John；为邻里做一些有意义的事情，帮助他人）Mary will do housework at home so that her parents can feel less tired after work．【高分句型】（Mary；在家做家庭作业，让父母少累）I always pay attention to the environment．Therefore，I'm going to help to protect the environment by being a volunteer and giving out the leaflets around the city．Moreover，I plan to write a report about the air pollution in Nanjing．（我打算做志愿者保护环境）
In short，although we have different kinds of plans，we all want to try our best to do something important．【高分句型】

点评 图表类作文写作之前考生首先要认真审题，确定文章的中心．表格内容要全部包括在作文中，词数要符合要求．句式表达要正确，注意句子的主谓宾、主系表等结构．文章结构要清晰．考生在平时的英语学习中需牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理，也可为文章增色不少．