Question

【题目】书面表达

生命就像是一种回声，你送出什么它就送回什么，你播种什么就收获什么，你给予什么就得到什么。因此，人们常说“帮助别人就是帮助自己”。请以Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves 为题写一篇短文。

要求：1. 思路清晰，观点明确，语法正确，有说服力；

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 80词左右。

Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves

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Answer 1

【答案】Helping Others Is Helping Ourselves

Nobody is perfect enough to manage to do everything, so help is necessary and important in our life. On the one hand, we should help others often. Giving help can bring us pleasure. Helping an old man cross the road often makes me feel confident and useful. On the other hand, we need others’ help when we get into trouble. I often get help from my parents, friends, teachers, even some strangers. Thanks to their help, it is easy for me to get out of trouble.

All in all, everyone needs help. And only who are willing to help others will also be helped.

【解析】

本文属于话题作文，主要讲述“帮助别人就是帮助自己”。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如adj+enough，on the one hand，on the other hand，make sb do，get into trouble，thanks to，it is adj for sb to do sth。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。