题目内容
【题目】书面表达
近期,关于师生冲突的新闻频现媒体。针对这一现象,某英文报社就“如何处理师生之间的矛盾”发起了一个专题征文活动。假设你是李华,请根据下表中的内容提示,结合你自己的观点,用英语写一篇小短文,发表在学校“英语角”上。
原因 | 解决办法 |
1. 师生之间缺少交流与沟通; 2. 教师对学生要求过分严格; 3. 不良的家庭教育; …… | 1. 加强交流与沟通,消除误解; 2. 建立平等友好的师生关系; 3. 加强家校沟通; …… |
注意:
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3.词数: 80左右,信件的开头与结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇: conflict n. 冲突 media n. 媒体 misunderstanding n. 误解
be lack of 缺少 build up 建立 family education 家庭教育
Recently, news about the conflicts between teachers and students frequently appear on the media. Why are the relationship between teachers and students becoming so serious?
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【答案】Recently, news about the conflicts between teachers and students frequently appear on the media. Why are the relationship between teachers and students becoming so serious?
Different people have different ideas about it. In my opinion, teachers and students are lack of good communication. Some teachers only pay attention to the students’ grades. Some teachers are too strict with the students. They ask the students to do this, not to do that, so students have too much pressure. Some students don’t have good family education. They gradually become rude and impolite.
To solve this problem, teachers and students need to chat often and avoid misunderstanding. Teachers should care more about students’ feelings and help them solve the problems in life. Little by little, they can build up an equal and friendly relationship. Besides, schools should often communicate with parents and ask parents to take part in school activities or talk about school events. Then they can know their children and the schools well.
All in all, understanding is a good way to solve the problems.
【解析】试题分析:这是一篇材料作文,以“师生冲突”为话题,结合所给材料,要把“师生冲突”的原因与解决方法有条理地表达出来,注意一些常见句式的应用,注意把握时态与人称。还要注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,注意文后要表达自己的观点和想法。
写作亮点:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开篇描述了“师生冲突”这种现象的存在,接下来介绍了“师生冲突”的原因与解决方法,最后作者对于“师生冲突”,发表了自己的观点和看法。本文使用了丰富的词汇,比如:in my opinion,be lack of, pay attention to,too much pressure,little by little, and, besides,all in all等交替运用,使文章增色不少,这是一篇不错的范文。