题目内容
13.中国在2012年伦敦奥运会赢得了38枚金牌,所有中国人都为此而感到骄傲.假设你是一名叫李明(Li Ming)的中学生,你也很热爱运动,擅长运动.请你用英语写一篇文章,内容包括:1.你的特长和爱好.
2.你想成为专业运动员(professional athlete),但你的父母不同意,请你阐述利弊.
3.请谈论你将如何为实现你的梦想而努力,并坚信你的梦想一定会成真.
作文要求:
1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名.
2.字体美观,语句连贯,卷面整洁,词数80个左右.
分析 【高分句型一】
I love running and I enjoy the feeling while I'm running on the playground我喜欢跑步,当我在操场上奔跑的时候我喜欢这种感觉.
while引导的时间状语从句.
【高分句型二】
I'll do lots of practice and I'm sure I can achieve my dream我将会大量练习,我确信我能实现梦想.
be sure that从句:确信…,that可省略.
解答 I'm Li Ming,a middle school student who dreams to be a professional athlete.
I love running and I enjoy the feeling while I'm running on the playground.【高分句型一】I have won many gold medals in the sports meeting.So I'm very proud of myself.(我的特长和爱好)However,my parents don't agree.They want me to get a good education as many other kids do.They say if I don't succeed,it will be hard for me to find an other way to make a living.I can understand them,but I'll never give up.(我想成为专业运动员.但我的父母不同意.)
I'll do lots of practice and I'm sure I can achieve my dream.【高分句型二】(如何实现)
点评 注意题目要求,注意紧扣文章主题,写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、词组及句型,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.
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