Question

【题目】写作
初中阶段的学习和生活即将结束，你的老师陪伴你度过了三年的校园生活。回顾其中的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请你用英文给你的某一位教师写封信，和他(她)说说感激的心里话。要点提示：

教师表现	1工作努力，认真； 2教学耐心(patient adj.)，待人友好。
留存记忆	1严格要求也关爱学生； 2师生相处和睦； 3给予学习上和生活上的帮助; 4学生学业取得了进步。

要求：1内容包括所有提示要点，意思完整，语言规范。
2可适当发挥，增加细节，使语句连贯通畅。
3文中不要出现你的真实姓名和学校。
480词左右，信的首尾已写好．不计入总词数。
Dear my teacher,
Leaving you and lovely junior schoollife, I have so many words from my heart to say.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear my teacher,
Leaving you－lovely junior school life, I have so many words from my heart to say.
Since you became my English teacher three years ago, you've always been working hard. I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are. You're strict with us in study and also take care of us kindly. All my classmates agree we get on well with each other for these years. I still remember when I failed in an exam, you encouraged me to keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you told me to be brave.
Because of your help, many students, including me, are more and more interested in English and make much progress, too. You have given me so much.
Yours,
Amy
【解析】这是一篇提纲作文。本文作者主要写三年的校园生活的回忆，全文所用时态有一般现在时态、一般过去时态，一般将来时态，还有现在完成时态。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。